Spiderwebs

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  1. PointZero's Avatar

    PointZero said:

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    Spiderwebs in the static.
    They're purple veins bring out the white lights.
    And my mind can't decipher what they're saying.

    Oh no, I've done it again.
    My mistakes have taken me on a de tour.
    I feel so stupid that I thought the toll would work.

    You'll wake up and smell the roses.
    You'll fall asleep and count the sheep.
    But if you wake up and no one releases,
    oh, no, don't you even make a peep.

    Spiderwebs crisscross again.
    I've turned around and the rain wouldn't budge.
    So I'm left alone battling my own thoughts tonight.

    Oh no, what's next?
    I don't wanna wake up and be a part of you.
    Free and deserted, tied up and cared for.

    You'll wake up and smell the roses.
    You'll fall asleep and count the sheep.
    But if you wake up and no one releases,
    oh, no, don't you even make a peep.

    And they
    wouldn't let me.
    They wouldn't let me go.
    I was,
    alone for the night.
    Oh I won't,
    keep up this fight.

    And they,
    couldn't be wrong.
    Couldn't be more wrong.
    I was,
    alone for the night.
    Oh I won't,
    keep up this fight.

    Spiderwebs in the static.
    They're purple veins bring out the white lights.
    And my mind can't decipher what they're saying...
     
  2. PointZero's Avatar

    PointZero said:

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    Okay, I've gone like 4 posts with no one saying anything. Any comments on this? Anything?
     
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    I just haven't been on much, but I really like a lot of what you write. You can write complexity and make it flow really good, but what I love about this one is the simplicity. Well actually it's mixed but that's great too, especially when it gets straight up and simple in the chorus. Great work, I love this!

    PS: thanks for the bump, otherwise I would've missed it again.
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  4. PointZero's Avatar

    PointZero said:

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    Thank you!