Life Kills

One more of my songs. This one is alright, might need some revision though.

Life Kills

Verse 1
Misery
In happiness
Death
In my life
I can’t survive
But I can win this fight
There’s blood in my tears
Hope in my fears

Chorus
Life is a contradiction
Life isn’t fair
But there’s nothing unfair about it
Get what’s coming to you
You don’t deserve it
God is by my side
God is thousands of miles away
All my heroes are villains
My enemies are friends
I’m alive
But dead inside
Life contradicts itself
Life kills


Verse 2
I love myself
But I hate who I’ve become
I’m a slave to this world
But I belong to no one
Putting myself through hell
It’s my piece of Heaven
Only time can tell
How timeless this is

This is really strong. You write some amazing stuff. I don't/can't offer any suggestions for improvement, I usually just like to encourage good writers to keep writing, and great ones to get copyrights

Keep it coming, I love the way you write.