Laid Down

I haven't worked out the tune yet but I've got some of the vocal harmony in my head, and I'd love to set this to trance. Maybe hardcore psy, anything 4/4 with lots of clear crisp energy. Maybe sort of like this but more Tiësto, better. I dunno ... opinions please?

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-Intro
My eyes ... your eyes ... raw from cyber disguise
And flesh carries on while bleeding heart cries
Maybe you'll hate me for writing this slate
But I laid down my heart for you from the start
Your eyes, my eyes, burnt-in cyber disguise
And flesh carries on while bleeding heart cries
Maybe you'll hate me for saying this late
But I laid down my heart for you from the start
(repeat?)

-Verse 1
I write lines and lines but no words define
The bottom line so I'll draw a sign
"I Love You" in Roses of Blue
Your favorite hue so you'll know it's for you

-Verse 2
Red is your favorite like the others have slaved it
But that doesn't matter I can hear thru the clatter.
You threw up a wall... but when you need to fall
Just drop in my arms and I'll keep you from harm

(You will see)

-Chorus
Maybe you'll hate me for writing this slate
But I laid down my heart for you from the start
Maybe you'll hate me for saying this late
But I laid down my heart for you from the start
(repeat)

-Verse 3
You'll always be my Best, can't even name the rest
On this Rock just depend till the world ends my Friend
I've known you longer than you've known yourself
And I can be stronger than any hero you've ever read

(Cause it's real)

-Chorus 2
You've been reading it wrong then writing your own song
Like a death march or such, but remember my touch
Maybe you won't like me for going on strike
But I laid down my heart for you from the start
(repeat)

(Let it be)

-Chorus 1
Maybe you'll hate me for writing this slate
But I laid down my heart for you from the start
Maybe you'll hate me for saying this late
But I laid down my heart for you from the start
(repeat x?)

(Fall with me)

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Lots of edits, sorry. I guess I'm done now