And Then There Was

During the last full moon
There was a bright haze
That kept it from the gloom
And our days were sunny
But then two bright lights shone
And I was blinded in my room
And it seemed a little funny
But it wasn't

I didn't know where you went
So I spent all day wondering
Then I glimpsed you on the balcony
As if you were plundering
Our time together in malcontent
A blue funk that faded you
While I wandered the halls
of our withering fall

A winter wind blows
And then it doesn't
Where does time go?
The months are a dozen
And what did we show?
Time became frozen
But then it thawed
And I have to go

But I won't really
You know I'll be here
It would seem silly
To throw away the year
When I was reborn
Out of a long dark storm
Five hundred months
Of life most forlorn
And then there was you.
:3

~ ~ ~

So this one was weird. Wake up in the middle of the night, have 3 itty-bitty little thoughts ... an image, a winter wind, and where does time go ... and it turns into 4 full verses. But I don't have a chorus yet, or a developed melody, so I almost posted it in Poetry. But I wanted it here instead, coz this is where I usually am, so here it is.

"A winter wind blows
And then it doesn't
Where does time go?
The months are a dozen
And what did we show?
Time became frozen
But then it thawed
And I have to go

But I won't really
You know I'll be here
It would seem silly
To throw away the year
When I was reborn
Out of a long dark storm
Five hundred months
Of life most forlorn
And then there was you."

I love this part ! Normally, I don't really come here, you can find me in the rap lyrics forum, but I might come here more often ...

I loved it moon ride, especially how you put it together. You made it dreamy^^
keep it uppppppp!

Thanks so much Mol, and yeah I read the rap section several times a week. So yep yep you gotta check in here more often! Thanks again, glad you liked it!

ShadowLee it was a "dreamy" (haze) kind of thing. About a week ago I saw a full moon in a dark clear sky, with a haze surrounding it that gave the impression of a spooky-old-castle-on-a-hill mystique, mixed with some old sentiments. Thanks much for your comments!

, o_o" that sounded so inspiring lol nd your welcome :]

And then there was ShadowLeeSharp?? Well I wanted to name myself ShadowLeeLawliet.. -.-..

OH Nd then there was moon ride !!!!!!
Yes, yes. Good job (again lol)

Lol Well Lil Miss Shadowness I've gotta say that I truly appreciate your vibes. You can bring a smile to every page

*SMILES*
awh thanks, I'm glad you think of me that waaaaaaaaay :'3

Hehe you's my buddy now, right?

*checks friends list.. Sits like L*
YEAH, but no no no YUR my Spuddie.
They are better than just "buddies"
Lmao xD
*fifteen thousanth time I read these lyrics lmfao x) *

Aw, I'm ur Spuddie??
15000, wow. Ok now maybe you should give your eyes a break before you fall asleep at the wheel

, xP I'm an insomniac it's HARD TO FALL ASWEEEEEP lmao,
, xD n my bff angela is gone for the week so there's no one to talk tewwwww
And I'm out of cheesecake (damn..)

Yeah I get insomnia too, but I usually make up for it at work lol
You CANNOT be out of cheesecake. Whats ur address, I'll send a truck over.
j/k
Hmmm I think we're spamming this thread now. What to do, what to do ...

Yeh.. But I was born with it.. I make up for it whenever someone is lecturing me haha xD
It's 5578 I'm out of cheesecake dr.
Send it immediately haha.

SPAM IT MORE! SPAM IT MORE! Lol jk jk, um.. Idk PM me? Lol? Haha? Hehe? Heh heh? Ehhh,,,?

Nice job i can really picture it.

Awesome lyrics, great image =)

Mon and Elk thanks muchies!! I'm really kinda proud of this one