Rejuist Sleuis

*New record, 1 minute 34 seconds.*
Hello,
how have you been?
We were there watching you.

Although the same,
it's not the same.
But what could we do?

I knew you were right,
and you,
you knew too.
But now I think it's late,
and we need to let go.

Same age,
but we're not so similar.
Grew up too fast just to be a sinner.

Maybe one day,
you'll grow up too.
Hopefully when it comes you'll know what to do.

I knew you were right,
and you,
you knew too.
But now I think it's late,
and we need to let go.

Anybody ever listen to the wind?
Watch the snow make angels with the sky?
Jumped off a bridge in the middle of the night?
Contemplated social suicide?
Yeah,
you know you do.

I knew you were right,
and you,
you knew too.
But now I think it's late,
and we need to let go.

Just need to let go.

Just need to let go.

Too bad I swallowed the key.

The last verse caught me off guard xD
Nice work and rad new record bro, keep it up haha

Thanks! And new record?

Ohhh, never mind, I forgot about it! :P

Nvm bout that lmao
Your welcome zero xP

Originally Posted by PointZero

*New record, 1 minute 34 seconds.*
Hello,
how have you been?
We were there watching you.

Although the same,
it's not the same.
But what could we do?

I knew you were right,
and you,
you knew too.
But now I think it's late,
and we need to let go.

Same age,
but we're not so similar.
Grew up too fast just to be a sinner.

Maybe one day,
you'll grow up too.
Hopefully when it comes you'll know what to do.

I knew you were right,
and you,
you knew too.
But now I think it's late,
and we need to let go.

Anybody ever listen to the wind?
Watch the snow make angels with the sky?
Jumped off a bridge in the middle of the night?
Contemplated social suicide?
Yeah,
you know you do.

I knew you were right,
and you,
you knew too.
But now I think it's late,
and we need to let go.

Just need to let go.

Just need to let go.

Too bad I swallowed the key.

I knew you were right,
and you,
you knew too.
But now I think it's late,
and we need to let go.

this bit is good, perhaps try and find a different word instead of late, something that rhymes with right perhaps?

Anybody ever listen to the wind?
Watch the snow make angels with the sky?
Jumped off a bridge in the middle of the night?
Contemplated social suicide?
Yeah,
you know you do.

this is the best bit by far, the third and fourth line are good, perhaps take social out and just have contemplated suicide though.

This is your song though and ultimately it's your decision on what you feel is right or not Im just giving some posibly useful pointers