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If you are trying to rap to get money, don't do it
Screw it, your plans will be ruined
This is a one-way road, no goin back
Once you lock your wheels on the track
There's no looking back
Yea

Rappin until I can't breath anymore
Rappin so my girl don't leave through that triple-locked door
Bills to pay, nerves shaken down to the core
Need some money fast, "how about robbin that liquor store"
Thoughts of being someone famous, but I just kept dreaming
Believing
Ended up scheming
Deceiving, and fiending
Ski Mask Way, like 50 Cent, just don't give a ****
Any way to make a quick buck
Wasting all my money just to get my **** sucked
In my '03 pick-up truck
No reason to keep fighting, I need an ounce of hope
Instead I spend my dough on an ounce of dope
I found some rope
Tie me down with weights, and then drown with the boat

Chorus:
Because, money's like a dime, harder to get with age
But honey I just keep with my rhymes, act like I'm a part of the stage
It's sunny outside, my heart leaps farther with a turn of each page
It's funny how these lines could be the way out of my cage
But instead, I'm just gonna keep smokin' up, I'm blazed
Out of my mind
Feels like I've erased all time
Mute like a professional mime
And I keep dreaming

7/11 hold-up, start of a new phase
Clerk gives me the money, but asks "Buddy, are you crazed?"
My eight robbery this week, I'm desperate, I got bills to pay
Kid killed yesterday
Maybe no one will get killed today
Cops tracking me down, I know one day there'll be hell to pay
Hopefully, when my boy gets old enough I'll still be here to say
Robbing and stealing are no way to get paid
or get laid
Cause in this rap game, you got two choices, you hear what I'm sayin?
It's either you get sprayin, or you get layin
In that coffin
They'll often
Think of you as a hero
Only you know the truth, it was only about the dinero
How does it feel to die with a bank account that reads a fat zero?

Chorus

Just wrote this, whatever came to my mind went down, tweaked it a little bit so it made more sense. Comment and criticize!!