Fly [a thought]

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    ShadowLeeSharp said:

    Default Fly [a thought]

    I know, some stories say.
    Once you leave all will fade away.
    N I'll set out for the day.
    Into [into] the blue sky.

    I wouldn't dare to see you morn,
    And I wouldnt want to sigh.
    Life just isn't that right.
    Because a happy smile, isn't real.
    When your hiding even a lie.

    Who's to blame?
    Who's to blame?

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    I'll fall to the ground,
    Will you catch me?
    Maybe.

    And if I fly way up high,
    Will you be by my side?

    Though every wall in this room, is saying
    That the grudge is to big to move.
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    Idk it's a thought and I have nowhere else to put it (yes I do..) so I put it here for safe keeps

    I know it makes no sense...
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
  2. Mon said:

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    I think its a little short and this is good but the only thing i would say is change a few lines that mean the same but different words to make it more interesting for example change "And if I fly way up high,Will you be by my side?".
     
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    Yeah it was just an idea, my lyrics get pretty s***** when I don't eat or when I'm really tired. yeah I'll be sure to pimp it up a notch tomorrow^^

    *relaxes*
    but for now, I watch naruto lol^^
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-