Beautiful Elevation

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  1. Mon said: 03-06-2011 05:46 AM

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    Experimentalist said: 03-08-2011 08:29 AM

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    I like these lyrics Mon. The main reason for liking them is they are really easy to read and thought evocative. The 2 things that make a lyric, when on their own (ie. without a tune or knowledge of a melody) stand out. Job well done Mon, keep up the good work.

  3. Mon said: 03-08-2011 09:21 AM

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    Thanx about that post i posted on your pointer thread i wasn't trying to be rude actually it was like if you criticize something try to offer some advise on how to make it better, hope you understand and sorry if sounded rude or if im still sounding rude.

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    Experimentalist said: 03-08-2011 05:51 PM

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    No problems Mon, I know you weren't being rude. Sometimes I just find some lyrics just can't be worked with at all and if they are really bad is it not better to tell the person to start again? Tough love and all that? No point telling someone their song is amazing if it is awful.

    The song in this thread as I said above is far from awful anyway.

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    MoonRide*r* said: 03-08-2011 08:59 PM

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    Mon I gotta say the title is one of the best parts of this. I'll bet it just led the whole thing didn't it? Of course I don't know which came first but I can imagine how it must've just poured itself out. Very nice Mon, surely one of your best.
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  6.  Mon said: 03-09-2011 03:01 AM

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    Actually it started from those three ocean lines then the word beautiful elevation came well after that like you said it led the song and thanks.