Falling Stars

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  1. Nanashi's Avatar

    Nanashi said:

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    There were less feelings than I believed would be
    Not even batting an eye, maybe somehow I already knew
    Now that it's become real, it seems right to escape
    With more memories becoming empty, this moment is all there is

    Pushing back against what cannot sway, I twist my thoughts at ease
    Sadly, no longer as beautiful as they used to be
    You were more than wonderful when the veil was all there was
    Seeing, no longer can I say you're the same...

    There are no angels made with flesh and blood
    Should the wind wipe the tears from my eyes
    Let it also take the memories as it falls
    A shooting star shining where you can't see

    Nothing more than strangers walking the same road
    Once something was there, no longer can either remember
    Only recalling searching for the cure to loneliness
    More empty than before and still alone as I look at you

    There are no demons made with flesh and blood
    Should the sky carry away the earth beneath me
    Let it also take the memories as I fall
    A shooting star shining where you can't see

    There are less feelings than I believed still inside
    Now that it's become real, I can't escape...

    -Joshua-
    Last edited by Nanashi; 03-20-2011 at 03:07 PM.
     
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    This is absolutely brilliant Joshua, it has an elegance that goes beyond the words. These are my favorites lines - a painful altruism, cushioned by the only comfort that seems apparent:

    There are no angels (or demons) made with flesh and blood
    ...
    A shooting star shining where you can't see

    But I love every line of this, from beginning to end.
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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    Nanashi said:

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    I appreciate it, MoonRide! I actually wrote it in one sitting and in not that much time. Impressive for me, haha!