Is This The End (Shadows Magic)

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  1. ShadowLeeSharp's Avatar

    ShadowLeeSharp said:

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    I should, quit talking.
    Quit walking. Through an empty world.
    Quit singing, quit singing.
    But would that be the smartest choice to make?
    Should I quit, writing songs?
    is that really a Risk I should take?

    Shadows magic feels as if,
    Its ending.
    Flying away, it was never here to stay, at all.
    Is this, the end?
    N I'm getting bored with this filthy world.
    cause mines ending.
    My minds flying away, imagination's by the bay.
    Of farewell.
    Is this the end?


    Farewell to writing songs,
    Cause it's been a lil to long since I've writtin a melody,
    I've run out of sweet melodies...
    N all there is, is this plastic box.
    Full of Old written songs, but my locked.
    From this love n sympathy, in every stroke.
    I admit, I haven't written a song. For about while.
    I'm being impenitent, I'm such a child.
    It seems so damn long and,
    I'm running out of songs..
    I so want to really give up.
    I kinda want to really give up..
    I'm getting really stuck..
    I kinda want to really give up...



    Shadows magic feels as if,
    Its ending.
    Flying away, it was never here to stay, at all.
    Is this, the end?
    N I'm getting bored with this filthy world.
    cause mines ending.
    My minds flying away, imagination's by the bay.
    Of farewell.
    Is this the end?


    I'm running outta rhymes,
    I'm running outta lines.
    I'm running outta loving my passion to write..

    I'm running outta time,
    I'm sick of making rhymes..
    I Have questions and I'm still young,
    I need help, but I'm so stubborn I'd always fall by myself on purpose.
    I need help, I'm changing melodies.
    But my originality is fading to a reality,
    I need help.


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    OMG look at this bad writing!! I look like a F****** rookie!! I look like a newbie! A fake! A noob!! What the hell happened?! I'm so ticked off right now I totally forgot how to write a song!!!
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
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    Nanashi said:

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    Actually, I when one understands what is behind the song, it is hard to say it is bad writing, yes? Is that not the goal? I believe the message conveyed was captured by myself. I hope so! If you are not satisfied, come back to it when you know the words are with you, dear. Do not be so hard on yourself!

    -Nanashi-

    We all have those days, hahaha! It will be fine!

    -Joshua-
     
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    ShadowLeeSharp said:

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    I love y'all two .... lol ^^
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-