Head-Wound City III

Took parts of Wolf Names and Part II and added new junks. These lyrics are being used for our newest jams, I'm pretty proud of how well it came out since it's very personal to me. lyrics in boxes are unclean vocals (screams/whatever you wanna call em). Several joint screams/cleans are sang simultaneously, which adds alot to it. It's a pretty exciting song for us, I'd love some feedback.


You’ve been sleeping and I’ve been rehearsing
My explanation to figure the best misdirection.

Oh cure, I'm the loneliest disease
I welcome what in turn will destroy me
Sleep sound, we’ve fooled them all
No one can see through us; only us.
[Only us]

We never understand but we always fear
And those nervous last words we’ve been dying to hear?
[I never loved you, now you are free to leave]
Well they were worth waiting for

Lay back down to think of time and what it's done
[Can we take back what we can only give once?]

Oh, I don’t mean to preach
But I’ve got so much to say
There are so many things you’ve taken for granted
But now you come in close
Before my mouth has time to form the words
falling forward
[I fall for yours]

[Don’t forget that halos can be bought, and hers, it tilts]
[Echoing her every word, your conscience begs 'don’t fall for it']
And I give in, how appropriate
[That I wake with my own]

I won't say it's obvious
But I’d be lying if I said I’m surprised
Stumbling the borderline
Could we pick a side?
[White noise reminders of what we hide from the world]
[Oh you can save yourself, just not from me]
[You beg for distance? I beg to differ.]

I like this. It's got something to it, like a melancholy but resigned-to-fate soliloquy
I like these - "You beg for distance? I beg to differ." and "Don’t forget that halos can be bought, and hers, it tilts."