Title: a broken heart (leave a comment plz)

For sometime now
I thought you were the one
You wore a mask of deception
Like a fool I fell for your trap
Now here I am passed on as you live on
Cold as fresh fallen snow
So numb I can’t feel damn thing
I remember your smile as you killed me

(Chorus)
A Broken heart caused my demise
You went for me to see
How much pain a broken heart can cause
You once promised you'd never leave
Now here I am
Killed by a broken heart
You show no sadness only a smile on your face
Death came to me in the form of a broken heart
How could you have done this to me?
Watching me die from broken heart
(Chorus end)

You came to me told me everything was a lie
My heart shattered as rives flowed from my eyes
The world turned black
You were everything to me now
Telling me everything was a lie
How do you expect me to live though the pain?
You show no sadness only smiles
As I started to die right in front of you

(chorusx2)
A Broken heart caused my demise
You went for me to see
How much pain a broken heart can cause
You once promised you'd never leave
Now here I am
Killed by a broken heart
You show no sadness only a smile on your face
Death came to me in the form of a broken heart
How could you have done this to me?
Watch me die from broken heart
(Chorus end)

You walk around telling your tale
Of how you wore a mask
Deceived a foolish girl
And how she died all alone
You never realized everything I felt for you was true
Yet everything you felt was a lie
You took everything from me
Leavening me to die all alone!

(chorusx3)
A Broken heart caused my demise
You went for me to see
How much pain a broken heart can cause
You once promised you'd never leave
Now here I am
Killed by a broken heart
You show no sadness only a smile on your face
Death came to me in the form of a broken heart
How could you have done this to me?
Watch me die from broken heart
(Chorus end)

*sighs happily* how more awesome can your songs get alejandro (:]...

A Broken heart caused my demise
You went for me to see
How much pain a broken heart can cause
You once promised you'd never leave
Now here I am
Killed by a broken heart
You show no sadness only a smile on your face
Death came to me in the form of a broken heart
How could you have done this to me?
Watch me die from broken heart

As LyricsAngel would always say to me, "I'm speechless" tee hee ^__^ <3

This is sad and lovely and... well, broken. It's brilliant.

thx for your thoughts thank you very much

Yeah I agree, "broken" and I mean that in a complimentary way. With my limited imagination I was trying to find a melody, but couldn't quite do it, but I can certainly sense a rhythm. Nice work