Parody of life

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  1. Hugo Zhor said:

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    What is this I can´t believe my eyes
    This is hell not a paradise
    People work all day to stay alive
    Even at work they do not like

    At school we are taught how to think
    Instead of teaching to learn to think
    There´s no money politicians say
    They know where all taxes fade away

    Spend millions to the stars to fly
    Meanwhile jobless trying to survive
    National lies start a new conflict
    The only point´s to increase profit

    General truth written in the press
    Following it lead you to success
    A prisoner of majority
    Or you will die in madhouse free

    Bridge:
    We all used to lies
    This is God´s order
    We´ll never realize
    We´ve been concerned in

    Chorus:
    Parody of life – we are living in
    Parody of life – neverending wheel of insanity
    Parody of life – smiling with a grin
    Parody of life – who will see through absurdity?

    Bridge:
    We all used to lies
    This is God´s order
    We´ll never realize
    We´ve been concerned in

    Chorus:
    Parody of life – we are living in
    Parody of life – neverending wheel of insanity
    Parody of life – smiling with a grin
    Parody of life – who will see through absurdity?
     
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    ShadowLeeSharp said:

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    Very strong song, me likes it
    The first parts before the bridge is just wonderful, straight to the point and just marvelous in the way you say it.
    I like how you write, very nice style I've been reading a lot of your lyrics and they are awesome man I love em.
    BTW
    At school we are taught how to think
    Instead of teaching to learn to think
    There´s no money politicians say
    They know where all taxes fade away

    Spend millions to the stars to fly
    Meanwhile jobless trying to survive
    National lies start a new conflict
    The only point´s to increase profit


    Fav bit nice job!!
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
  3. Grendels said:

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    Good, really good, sounds like it could be a punk song... has a really nice flow. It's good right down to the title "Parody of life", I like that, really great ideas man.
    "At school we are taught how to think Instead of teaching to learn to think", That part might need some revision, it kind of breaks the flow of the song, it makes a valid point, but the way it's stated doesn't flow right, at least imo. At school, we are taught how to think, instead of trained to comprehend... or something like that. Great song though, simple, to the point, and real.
     
  4. Hugo Zhor said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by ShadowLeeSharp View Post
    Very strong song, me likes it
    The first parts before the bridge is just wonderful, straight to the point and just marvelous in the way you say it.
    I like how you write, very nice style I've been reading a lot of your lyrics and they are awesome man I love em.
    BTW
    At school we are taught how to think
    Instead of teaching to learn to think
    There´s no money politicians say
    They know where all taxes fade away

    Spend millions to the stars to fly
    Meanwhile jobless trying to survive
    National lies start a new conflict
    The only point´s to increase profit


    Fav bit nice job!!
    Thank you. I´m glad you like it. I tried to change the world then I tried to change myself to change the world but it doesn´t work. So this is the only way, cry my anger out in lyrics:-)
     
  5. Hugo Zhor said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Grendels View Post
    Good, really good, sounds like it could be a punk song... has a really nice flow. It's good right down to the title "Parody of life", I like that, really great ideas man.
    "At school we are taught how to think Instead of teaching to learn to think", That part might need some revision, it kind of breaks the flow of the song, it makes a valid point, but the way it's stated doesn't flow right, at least imo. At school, we are taught how to think, instead of trained to comprehend... or something like that. Great song though, simple, to the point, and real.
    Thank you. Yeah, this is faster heavy metal song kind of punk speed.
    You´re right about "At school we are taught how to think Instead of teaching to learn to think" doesn´t flow so good but I like this verse from lyrical view.
    Thank you for your try "At school, we are taught how to think, instead of trained to comprehend".
     
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    Katie13 said:

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    True. All true, every last word, and it's put together brillaintly
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."