
Originally Posted by
Grendels
Good, really good, sounds like it could be a punk song... has a really nice flow. It's good right down to the title "Parody of life", I like that, really great ideas man.
"At school we are taught how to think Instead of teaching to learn to think", That part might need some revision, it kind of breaks the flow of the song, it makes a valid point, but the way it's stated doesn't flow right, at least imo. At school, we are taught how to think, instead of trained to comprehend... or something like that. Great song though, simple, to the point, and real.