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  1. MR.Alexander said:

    Talking Title: Apart We Die (leave comment plz)

    Sometimes I wonder why
    Why can't the people leave us alone?
    Let us be together in peace
    Always trying to tare us apart
    Don’t they realize?
    What will happen if they succeed?

    (Chorus)
    Tearing us apart
    Will leave us no reason to live
    No reason for joy
    Together we live a life of joy
    Apart we die
    Living a life of sadness in the shadows
    There’s no way
    We live for each other
    We’re not meant to be apart
    Together we live our lives to the fullest
    Apart we die
    Living a life without sunshine, no air
    There is no way
    Together we live
    Apart we die
    (Chorus end)

    We’ve been together for so long
    Our hearts have joined as one
    Our love stronger then any in the world
    Everyday that passes our love only get stronger
    They can try to break us apart
    They can try and try till time withers them away
    But if they succeed they should know what they have done

    (chorusx2)
    Tearing us apart
    Will leave us no reason to live
    No reason for joy
    Together we live a life of joy
    Apart we die
    Living a life of sadness in the shadows
    There’s no way
    We live for each other
    We’re not meant to be apart
    Together we live our lives to the fullest
    Apart we die
    Living a life without sunshine, no air
    There is no way
    Together we live
    Apart we die
    (Chorus end)


    Our love is to strong to break
    To break our love would be to break
    Our reason to live
    Shatter our world into a thousand pieces
    To break our dreams
    Leaving us with no joy, no dreams
    Nothing us with nothing but tears
    With a slowly bleeding dying heart

    Chorusx3)
    Tearing us apart
    Will leave us no reason to live
    No reason for joy
    Together we live a life of joy
    Apart we die
    Living a life of sadness in the shadows
    There’s no way
    We live for each other
    We’re not meant to be apart
    Together we live our lives to the fullest
    Apart we die
    Living a life without sunshine, no air
    There is no way
    Together we live
    Apart we die
    (Chorus end)
     
  2. RobberBaron said:

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    Very meaningful, I can relate to it. The first verse draws me in, but I love the flow and the theme; "together we live, apart we die", very good
     
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    Katie13 said:

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    This is chock full of emotion - it reminded me more of twins, for some reason There's a couple of spelling mistakes too - 'tare' should be 'tear' and 'to' should be 'too' - but I only noticed it when I read it a second time. This first time I was hooked!!!! Like a lot
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     
  4. MR.Alexander said:

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    im a horrible speller but thank you for leaving your thoughts thank you