Still nameless ideas about the superficiality of fame...

My songs are never about what they were supposed to be about. This was another stage of writers block. It's changed tone dramatically from originally intended and now it is very cheesy, but hey, cheesy is my middle name. No, really, Robber Cheesy Baron. So at the moment I think it's about the superficiality of fame...

Shining Star - Copyright © RobberBaron Enterprises 2011

[Verse]

When you lose all your money,
You spend your last dime,
You run out of make-up,
You run out of time

You drop all your diamonds,
And down go your wings,
Your halo is broken,
Your heart no longer sings

[Pre-Chorus]

But I,
I know that there's still time,
Still time to make it right,
At least tonight

[Chorus]

Don't forget your freedom,
To be who you are,
No hiding no deception,
Just shine like a star

Don't have all your worries,
Paparazzi plastic dreams,
Just give it all and give it up,
And you'll be a queen

[Verse]

When you strive to be happy,
Or fall under a spell,
You lose natural beauty,
You lose life as well

You never said sorry,
You never gave in,
But baby now I'm back,
And I'm ready to win

[Pre-Chorus]

But I,
I know that there's still time,
Still time to make it right,
At least tonight

[Chorus]

Don't forget your freedom,
To be who you are,
No hiding no deception,
Just shine like a star

Don't have all your worries,
Paparazzi plastic dreams,
Just give it all and give it up,
And you'll be a queen

I really like the theme. It flows well and has some excellent thought in lyric. The structure is excellent. Very nice song RB.

Take care

Well thanks very much I didn't know writers-block could be so helpful

For reference purposes this will be known as "Shining Star".