Colours of Your Heart attempt... fail!

Done in about 3 minutes :P Here you are, Robber - whatcha think??

There are a million words a lover uses,
To show the love they see,
But none can perfectly describe,
Just what you mean to me,

Your eyes could be sapphires,
The bluest summer sky,
A calm sea in the tropics,
But I know that’s not quite right,

I can’t capture you in song,
You’re too wonderful for words,

Compared to me, you’re amazing,
A classic to scribbled mess,
And if I were a nursery rhyme,
Baby, you’d be Sondheim,
It’s charcoal, pen and pencil,
When we are apart,
I’ll let you paint my world,
With the colours of your heart,

Your smile could light up worlds,
Like the sun does every day,
But that’s much too common for you,
But I can’t think of what to say,

Your face, a single masterpiece,
Beautiful length of prose,
The rarest form of perfect art,
But that’s not even close,

I can’t capture you in song,
You’re too wonderful for words,

Compared to me, you’re amazing,
A classic to scribbled mess,
And if I were a nursery rhyme,
Baby, you’d be Sondheim,
It’s charcoal, pen and pencil,
When we are apart,
I’ll let you paint my world,
With the colours of your heart,

As Shakespeare to the Dark Lady,
The world could not compare,
To such perfection as you, baby,
You’re one of a kind,
Drive me out of my mind,
‘Cause you’re all I can think of lately,

I can’t capture you in song,
You’re too wonderful for words,

Compared to me, you’re amazing,
A classic to scribbled mess,
And if I were a nursery rhyme,
Baby, you’d be Sondheim,
It’s charcoal, pen and pencil,
When we are apart,
I’ll let you paint my world,
With the colours of your heart,

A masterpiece! Amazing! Flowing theme, great metaphors, running idea. This is outstanding

You sure you're reading the right song?? :P It took me 3 minutes...

Time makes no difference, think about it, the best songs are timeless

Cheesy, but I suppose it's true
Ah, thanks, mate

Originally Posted by Katie13

Done in about 3 minutes :P Here you are, Robber - whatcha think??

I can’t capture you in song,
You’re too wonderful for words,

I’ll let you paint my world,
With the colours of your heart,

Nice lyrics. I like these lines and metaphors.

Thank you