Anti-Fairytale

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  1. Katie13's Avatar

    Katie13 said:

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    Today began with once upon a time,
    With me in a lowly state,
    Not exactly the village beauty,
    Working, singing of her fate,

    There was something like a royal ball,
    Dreams of music and dance,
    I wasn’t invited, I was left alone,
    While everybody lived and laughed,

    Baby, I’m no princess,
    Guess I’m just too coarse,
    But you can be my prince,
    Riding down on your white horse,
    So I’m a tiny bit sarcastic,
    A little bit too dark,
    My prince said it doesn’t matter,
    Because I still stole his heart,

    I suppose I caused a paradox,
    When I rescued you,
    The evil ones can gawp away,
    I’m writing this a-new,

    Never been content to be,
    A damsel in distress,
    We slew the dragon together,
    We’re both facing each test,

    Baby, I’m no princess,
    Guess I’m just too coarse,
    But you can be my prince,
    Riding down on your white horse,
    So I’m a tiny bit sarcastic,
    A little bit too dark,
    My prince said it doesn’t matter,
    Because I still stole his heart,

    Won’t prick my finger on a spindle,
    I’ve no reaction to fruit,
    Won’t get locked up in a castle,
    Or end up being mute,
    Gonna wield my own sword,
    Help you with our load,
    If it’s our battle to win,
    You won’t fight it alone,

    Baby, I’m no princess,
    Guess I’m just too coarse,
    But you can be my prince,
    Riding down on your white horse,
    So I’m a tiny bit sarcastic,
    A little bit too dark,
    My prince said it doesn’t matter,
    Because I still stole his heart,
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     
  2. RobberBaron said:

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    I really like this, great theme
     
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    Katie13 said:

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    Heehee, thanks
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    I think this is very nicely written, you made it work tremendously well and it's really sweet and it all comes down to this one line:

    My prince said it doesn’t matter

    I really love this
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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  5. Hugo Zhor said:

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    Great unusual title "Anti-fairytale" and nice theme. I like it.
     
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    Katie13 said:

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    Thank you
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."