Body Without A Soul

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  1. gdaz said:

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    Does your reflection have a shadow?
    can you see it when the lights are low?
    do your dreams have a conscience?
    will they haunt you when you sleep alone?
    do those eyes have a secret?
    will they tell me if I look for the truth?

    Darling, I think you know
    I don't even have to tell you so
    but it must get old
    for a body without a soul
    and I bet you'll laugh
    as you watch your world burn to ash
    but it must get cold
    for a body without a soul

    does your heart have a memory?
    does it start to stop when you try to forget?
    does your imagination need oxygen?
    does it suffocate a little more with every breath?
    do those eyes have a secret?
    will they tell me if I look for the truth?

    Darling, I think you know
    I don't even have to tell you so
    but it must get old
    for a body without a soul
    and I bet you'll laugh
    as you watch your world burn to ash
    but it must get cold
    for a body without a soul

    when you look in the mirror
    I hope you see yourself
    and when you ask yourself these questions
    your eyes will see the truth

    Darling, I think you know
    I don't even have to tell you so
    but it must get old
    for a body without a soul
    and I bet you'll laugh
    as you watch your world burn to ash
    but it must get cold
    for a body without a soul
     
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    Really nice expression. Each line pair is a subtle-but-clear slam.

    Does it start to stop while you try to forget? ... Nice twister

    Does your imagination need oxygen? .... my favorite line, and it adds another whole element of thought.

    This reads really good and I'd love to hear it
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