Just So You Know

I'm not saying your hot
just much prettier than most
never said I want you in bed
but I wouldn't mind to hold you close
its not that I'm dying to ask
you out on a date
but I guess if you said yes
I'd pick you up at eight

I'm not trying to play it cool but
don't want to be made a fool of
if I have nothing smooth to say
I would hate to seem too forward
or make you feel you're being cornered
I'm just here in-case you look my way

So, just so you know
if ever you, where ever to
say to me, you feel it too
it might just be
that I'm in love with you

won't say you blow me away
but I feel a little like a kite
I don't mean you're the girl of my dreams
but you sure look alot alike
don't bet that I got my heart set
on you giving yours to me
but I suppose if you're alone
I could keep you company

I'm not trying to play it cool but
don't want to be made a fool of
if I have nothing smooth to say
I would hate to seem too forward
or make you feel you're being cornered
I'm just here in-case you look my way

So, just so you know
if ever you, where ever to
say to me, you feel it too
it might just be
that I'm in love with you

I see to verses, 2 pre-choruses and 2 choruses; now you just need a 'bridge', a final 'ending chorus' and perhaps an 'outro' in the case that the ending chorus doesn't 'fade to end'... once you have that then you have a complete song mate! Adding an additional 'Intro' is always a great way to mix things up between your songs, and it also sets the stage for your song, as well, if your intro is subtle, then it also creates suspense and captivates the listeners interest to listen further. In any case, I really like what you have written here, it sounds a whole lot like myself and makes me wish that I wrote it.

Thanks, Tip. Your right, I did write it with two verses two pc's and 2 choruses, and could probably use a bridge. In have an intro and outro on guitar...I didn't write a middle eight for this one initially bc I felt like the PC's were achieving the equivalent lyrically. However, I think you're right in that it needs a break. Maybe a solo after the second chorus? Back into the chorus x2? Like "Don't Look Back In Anger" sort of...

most definitely, that would surfice indeed!... and DLBIA is a great song! Wish I could play guitar so I could write music for my material haha. Good luck with the track mate! What style of music is it by the way?