Miss Diamond (please rate)

Thread: Miss Diamond (please rate)

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  1. R&Bblood said: 05-16-2011 04:10 PM

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    miss diamond
    Last edited by R&Bblood; 06-28-2011 at 02:20 PM.

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    OneSongWayne said: 05-18-2011 12:49 PM

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    Hey, this is one darn good song with a lot of potential. Suggestion: Think about a diamond. What does it look like? Where does it come from? Where do you buy one? Who do you give one to? Why do you give it? Etc. Make some references comapring her to those things about a diamond. Be sure to keep what you already have, it's very good.

    Just a suggestion
    take care

  3. R&Bblood said: 06-26-2011 09:22 PM

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    Thanks a lot for the suggestions. I finally finished the song and edited the lyrics on here. There aren't too many references to diamonds but I think I'm just gonna leave it at this, it's simple but effective I think.

    Thanks!