A while in dreamland

No this feeling is rising up again
Thoughts of life meaning and frustration cause me pain
I know a way out to throw it all away
I know a place where dreams come true everyday

Bridge 1:
Two fallen angels on their path
Lined with blood and fire
We are not afraid of a death
Obey just lust and desire

Met for the first time by little happenchance
You showed me a way to dreamland with your hands
Your body and your mouth a gate out of misery
We are erupting as one in exctasy

Bridge 2:
We don´t really care what´s been saying
That is wrong or is right
We just listen to our instincts
True feelings burn inside

Chorus:
A while in dreamland – I have been
A while in dreamland – never seen
A while in dreamland

Bridge 3:
I wish this moment could last
Forever and ever
You´re the only one you´re the best
To make my cry and shiver

Chorus:
A while in dreamland – I have been
A while in dreamland – never seen
A while in dreamland

This reads really good. I wish I could hear this to some good Metal Music.

Thank you for your comment. Yeah, this is mid tempo metal song but music is only in my head

Maybe it's high time you started recording your song, hm?
A simple recording tool and a headset with good mic would do for a start.
Give it a thought, please.

Originally Posted by Paul Orhan

Maybe it's high time you started recording your song, hm?
A simple recording tool and a headset with good mic would do for a start.
Give it a thought, please.

I would like but I can´t sing and I´ve got no ear for music .

Originally Posted by Hugo Zhor

I would like but I can´t sing and I´ve got no ear for music .

I can agree with part one of your sentence - but as far as the second part is concerned that's not true. If you didn't have ear for music your lyrics wouldn't have any flow at all. And they have

Hugo,
I agree with Paul. I'm not a musician, but I taught myself basic guitar. I can't sing either, but I do! And I am amazed at how many people do like my music and my singing. So, don't be too quick to judge yourself without giving yourself a chance. Then let your audience be the judge. "Just do it".
Good luck!