Pick yourself up.

I get up in the morning, I head to work
My head is pounding, my boss is a jerk
Still feeling the whiskey from the night before

I'm in a pissed off mood, cause I can't deal
With the fact that she's gone, and ill never feel
The way I felt with her forever more.

I figure I've got two choices, and in my head I'm hearing voices
(And they say)

You gotta pick yourself up, before you self destruct
You got two choices infront of you, which one you going to choose?
Cause killing yourself isn't going to bring her back
You gotta leave it in the past, which one you going to choose?

I'm laying in bed its 4:00
everybody keeps calling, but i don't want to talk
Just want to sleep all this pain away

And even in my sleep I dream of you
and for a moment I'm sane, no clouded view
Im content in here so please don't let me wake

PC: I figure I've got two choices, and in my head I'm hearing voices
( and they say)

C:
PC:
C:
C:
C:

I can't live, I can't smile
Without you in my life
I'm sure to die die die
Ill live my life, but I have to deal...

You've got a good story line going and some very good lyrics. Get your structure together and a little tweeking here and there, and you'll have yourself a pretty darn good song. You're off to a good start. Well done!

Thank you, its easier coming straight from the heart.

I see exactly what your saying. And there are those exceptional songs that don't follow the rules but are awesome. To be a song it must have a melody. With the right melody this just may be one of those awesome songs. It already has heart. Lots of heart! And, I really like your song. Take care.