Lost World <3

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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    This is "short" but sometimes there's only so much to be said in words? And the effects and mood of the music take it from there.

    Lost World

    -verse 1-
    That lovely place where we used to meet
    Is just a trap of fear now
    You and I, we owned the streets
    But you're not even there now

    -verse 2-
    From a distance I watched in winter
    As I saw you come and go
    Then I built the mask that I still wear
    Coz I was afraid to show...

    Afraid our friends would know...

    -bridge-
    That we lost our world,
    That awesome world
    Where you used to be my girl...

    -chorus-
    Where are you now my Angel
    The one who loved me so
    I want to find you once again
    And I want the world to know...

    -verse 3-
    Just like I wanted to shout before
    How awesome you made me feel
    In dreamscapes where we met before
    And every dream was real

    -chorus-
    Where are you now, my Angel
    The one who loved me so
    I want to find you once again
    And I want the world to know...

    (long instrumental)

    -chorus-
    Where are you now, my Angel
    The one who loved me so
    I want to find you once again
    And I want the world to know...

    (repeat)

    I wanted the world to know
    That you were the one
    Who loved me so

    (imagine an ending for this that's something like Muse - Unintended)
    Last edited by MoonRide*r*; 06-08-2011 at 11:19 PM.
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    I was afraid that if I tried (struggled) to add more words that weren't in my initial "feel" for this particular song, it would take away instead of adding to it. Any thoughts/opinions on that? Does this stand okay as it is?
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    Maviii said:

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    Am not an expert, but i like it and i think it doesn't need anymore lines
    'cause this is what you felt - so just keep it as it is
     
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    Thank you Maviii, I'm glad you like it and I appreciate your advice
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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