First Rap, Please give feedback

This is my first time on this forum
For my raps this is where ill poor em
Where other member will respond
Are they insane or as stupid as a blonde?

As you know Im LightHeaded
Your brain is where my lyrics will be embedded
I may be only fourteen
But my raps are just plain mean

I started rapping only days ago
Eminem is pretty much all i know
So how did i do?
Will the crowd go boo
Or will the lyrics stick to u like superglue?

I dont like it personally, it seems like you havn't thought of a flow, but just put some ryhming words together

To be COMPLETELY honest, I'd rather listen to that 12 year old's first rap about being a pilot then you, mate. Oh and, it's P O U R not poor. But hey, if all of our first raps are amazing then we'd all be famous.