First Rap I Put Effort In, Feedback?

i think its time for me to admit it
years ago i should have just quit it
this **** lead on the wrong path
i had no chance, just do the math
once on it, there's no return
like a spaceship, flyin to saturn
you have to, keep moving forward
be as silent, stealthy as a blackbird
don't put to much, of a bounty on your head
cause chances are, you'll wind up dead
make sure, you make good choices
you hear your conscious,listen to those voices
stay true, to your friends
they'll help, those battle scares mend
true friends, will stick with you to the end
your only, credible resource
leave them, you'll feel remorse
no matter what, you did or said
in the end, you'll always wind up dead
there will never be, a happy resolution
theres only, one true solution
never go down, the wrong path
it can only end, as a bloodbath

Honest feedback, no offence intended:

Good rap isn't about rhyming couplets. This reads as a poem, and as the rhyming is in some lines forced, not a good one at that.