http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D7L6tMFEeMs

Post your lyrics to the above instrumental of Drake's "I'm On One". Let's see who would have the best remix. Original lyrics only...

i'm feelin so high
and i ain't even smoked yet
my visions on the goal and
i ain't ever choked yet
tried my best to explain
but you're a joke i don't get
had to leave em in the past
movin on to what's next
uh
and i'mma scream it to you feel me
satisfied with nothin even if it kills me
never been a fake that's why i don't see the movies
you you're just a camera reel tell me how you really feel
you i know you very well scared to try scared to fail
me i'm on that HD
i can see the whole thing
i'm patient with my progress makes it hard to hate me
but haters hate nevermind
can't pay them - any mind
i don't even see em man - i must be ****in blind
lemme just hit rewind...
complacent with your placement me i'm steady waitin
like a fortress in the forest completely lackin allegations
i cannot be touched i won't lose for nothin
got you scared like jason when i'm ****in elevatin
catch me up in neverland, somethin you can't understand
and before you roll your doja somebody shoulda told ya
that i'm on oneeeeeeeeeeee
yeah **** it i'm on one

ive been thinkin about doin this for a while

someone remind me how the beat goes
foret it ill go acapella
they say lifes a b*tch
well if you f*ck it it gets better
i love the way life hates
it drives me to work harder
some people live for their dreams
ill die for mine martyr
men go out to clubs
girls go to parties
we all get f_cked up
then we take a ride. harley
the cops pull us over
the girls show some skin
he lets us go and tells us dont do it again
we dont give a f_ck
cuz next weekend its the same
we all live the same life
but we dont all feel the fame
fake people fallin around me. rain
but im the only 1 who feels the pain
dont scream at the messenger some times he may run
to whoever's handin out wishes tellem .....
i want one
yea f_ck it i want one

both are nice guys, I would have put more of a tounge twisted style of rhyme in a few spots to switch up the style a bit.
both had a stop and go kinda flow. goes well with the song though. well expressed on both sides.
good drop....

This is my cover. It's nothing like drake but it flows well.



Sk'ns covering this track splitting the atoms like solar flares.
Spitting photonic energy ,penetrating our ozone layer.
Melting the polar caps from my heat, baring over the coldest air.
Start a new beginning, Cause at this moment no one cares.
The Apocalypse is almost here, our planets next on the hit list.
Waiting for planet X to cure our plants sickness.
Damn Sk'n gets Deep like ocean trenches, flows are endless.
Left sticking under 3 layers of skin like broken splinters.
*uck spiting like Drake, I ain't him and he ain't I.
That *hit don't fly, the temp is high ,let the chickens fry.
Switching up styles, to differentiate the difference.
Indicates the image that Sk'n is living proof how to separate the gifted,
From the witless spoofs. Who is this? Sk'n Deep! I'm relentless.
Never to stop until I stick my *ick in the top slot.
*ock block pop, from hip hop and watch it's arteries clot.
then pop the top off the Nitroglycerin, let Sk'n give it a shot.
Stop the heart Bring it back to life like the Doc.
Bury them with their albums under piles of lime rock.
I've got what it takes but I just haven’t been signed yet.
strong enough to climb Olympus Mons and survive it's climate.
Smart enough to Put life on mars, aline the sun moon and stars.
Produce an new environment with out Violence , and food at no cost.
Fool the rules of science, Cause I can do the impossible.
In full motion like locomotives homie this motive is unstoppable.

Copyright 07/08/2011

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