New hard rock song

This is a song I just made so I know it needs some work but tell me what you think. Any comment are excepted.





I'm lost in your lies*
Cause I know your not real
people say your always around me
youre the reason why your not here
you took away what we are*
you took away everything
youre the reason why your not here
youre the reason why I'm gone


How can I believe if your not real!
How can I if your not here!



How can I believe in you
if you took away*
if you away took away everything*
how can youe be believed in you
if your not real
Your not real!


but ive seen the reality
i don't want to cover up a scar
that was made by you!
sometimes i want to believe in you, but I can't!
I can't!


How can I believe if your not real!
How can I if your not here!


How can I believe in you
if you took away*
if you took away everything*
Everything
Everything
how can i believed in you
Tell me how


How can I believe in you
If you took away
If you took away everything*
How can I believe in you
If your not real!
not real!
NOT REAL!
YOUR NOT REAL!
NOT REAL!

Comment please! Is it good! Sucks let me know