Best 16 bars: rap battle WITH JUDGING (Topic of Choice!!!)

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  1. quickill said:

    Default Best 16 bars: rap battle WITH JUDGING (Topic of Choice!!!)

    Here's how it works. I start by posting 16 bars and a topic. For example, the topic might be "Rap battle" in which case we rep ourselves and slam the other. Or maybe it's "Girls" so then I post something about girls and your next rap has to be about girls. Whoever posts next has to post 16 bars on whatever subject I choose.

    After two people post, the third person posts who wins. So there is only one judge, they decide who had the better rap. Then they can post their own 16 bars or wait for someone else to. Remember, when you post your 16 bars, you HAVE to post what the topic is, and whoever goes after you HAS to rap about that topic.


    TOPIC: Club Song

    yeah

    runnin through this b*tch like a crash dummie
    shorty whatchu want heard you axed for me
    i can make it sweet you already know
    bring it up to the floor them she get low

    and the b*tch so fly like she got wings
    man she spicy as the sun like hot wings
    you don't even know she the f*ckin realest
    every night in the club man she f*ckin kill it

    now she all up in my head like a wet dream
    wanna take her to the crib make that girl scream
    plus we sippin on that bub yeah we gettin faded
    rollin up to the crib now we gettin weeded

    got two sweet girls in the hot tub
    drinkin straight from the bottle as we make love
    cuz we bang like the bass in the whole club
    then i shoot on her face call it tough love

    so hot so hot so hot so hot make it drop make it drop make it drop
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    Who said:

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    Sweating as sounds bounce in the setting around me
    Getting chicks to surround me, hear everyone shouting
    With loud noises in a dark void with my heart joyed
    Wishing it would never end like that part's destroyed

    My bars deployed as I glance and see some eye candy
    Fine, sassy, sexy hope they let me get some live action
    Boobs be poppin', booty dropping, soothly topped I'm drooling droplets
    Two good options, fool and knock them, rule like prom or choose to watch them

    Take them home and ditch the club
    Roll some up and smoke a dub
    Choke a sl*t and make some love
    Wrap with latex you wouldn't want a pup

    Drink 'till your gone, Smoke 'till your stoned
    Party all night like the world is gonna blow
    To pieces, reach up to the air with your cup
    Take a couple shots and never give up
    Last edited by Who; 08-08-2011 at 09:09 PM.
    Brain is athletic, I let it run
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    Tre_fly said:

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    Sippin syrup so you find me leanin before we hit the club up
    Startin with that promethazine, n' usin sprite to fill the double cup up
    Pull up like Jordan, smokin swishers, this text message's important, naked pictures
    *****es line cuttin(double entendre), when I step out stuntin, but I'll only kick it with a couple, Chris Sutton(soccer player)

    Shawty simply supple, but I'm bout to burst her bubble,
    Cause she grindin like a groupie, gropin, feelin right through me
    She place her hand up on my shoulder, I swear she could be my roller
    maybe push my baby's stoller.... wait. wait. wait. wait. What am I saying....

    ... New song, new thong. Boutta get a bunch a brain, Jimmy Nuetron
    Going through a gaggle of gorgeous girls, stopped on a snow bunny with golden curls
    Body on point like a tight joint, she on fire, takin me a lil higher
    I swear her name mary jane, she so dope bout to go insane

    Told her to come into my world(double entendre), climb on top and let your hair whirl
    The stretch limo's where I smoke my mary indo(ors) (reference to earlier), but no need to crack a window
    While she screamin, windows steamin, its seemin like my stretch's on fire
    But in reality, as your passin me, its just burnin rubber(double entendre)

    Cheaters/Fake people=Next topic
    "What we think, we become." Buddha
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    Tre_fly said:

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    ****, "Who" beat me to it. Quickill, wanna just make this one a three way one for the first and then go back to your format afterwards?
    "What we think, we become." Buddha
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    Who said:

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    Actually I'll give it to you Tre. I think your 16's better than mine.
    Brain is athletic, I let it run
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    Tre_fly said:

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    Thanks my man. I was just lookin at yours and the verse you posted on that other thread and I have to say I enjoy your stuff, keep it comin. Its good to get some more people that can actually rhyme on here. Props.
    "What we think, we become." Buddha
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    SK'nDeep said:

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    good stuff guys...yo tre I think you got this one.
    Peace Love Empathy

    Sk'nDeep
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    Tre_fly said:

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    Gracias Sk'n.
    "What we think, we become." Buddha
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    Zarex said:

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    Rap battle lets go son, lets go
    Live a good, noble life and pay no attention as to whether gods exist. If they are just, they will judge you for your virtuous life, not your worship.
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    Tre_fly said:

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    Haaa pick the topic my man
    "What we think, we become." Buddha
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    Zarex said:

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    Idk topic man, i was hopin u'd choose it lol
    Live a good, noble life and pay no attention as to whether gods exist. If they are just, they will judge you for your virtuous life, not your worship.
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    Tre_fly said:

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    Yo, just for, well me too, battle about Marijuana haha
    "What we think, we become." Buddha
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    Ur lines mexi brick, go harder than last pick
    Can't touch me, feds watch me, I move hash quick
    Dro mixed with blow, four hits to let you know
    This lightweight at the top, lonely, bouta drop the show
    Catch the fade, half ya face melt off, winning Slade
    Smash this roach, coach the only time u fly over the glade
    Three peat, no feat, i jab, stab, bag like its dank
    Ash the blunt force trauma riddled face, note the stank
    Premeditated Oz, shake the ***** like hoagie
    Adore me, I drop fiends, routes changed like a new fee
    While they sleepin, bring the weepin wench, Jade wrapped up in Fence
    Mother Mary, ***** burning, turning in the dirt, hence
    Forth, a quart of gas passed all over the lad's ***
    Light the green, sticky icky then go strike the last match
    BAM. Its hits, no fits, mellowed out, no use in bellowin out
    I crush u like my 5th blunt, **** found dead out South

    Hoped ya'll liked the wordplay throughout
    Live a good, noble life and pay no attention as to whether gods exist. If they are just, they will judge you for your virtuous life, not your worship.
  14. R&R said:

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    I'm sippin on this tonic, Smokin on this blueberyy chronic
    Don't know what you heard, but mary is the topic
    As I'm flying up above, givin you no love
    Slaying *****es left and right,no need to put up fight
    Cause I'm white boy gamin nerd, smokin on this herb.........

    Yeah I'm not very good at this lol but oh well if you guys have any tips let me know
    all advice will be accepted?

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