Saber vs. Karma (ROUND 1)

16 lines, 8 bars, no flipping. check in, deadline 48 hours after check in

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They say karma's a *****, but im prepared for this
If what comes around goes around im expecting a diss
Im an ametaur, but im hot enough to blow the thermometer
Bars tight like leather, i should be called the constrictor

Now i dont know your ability, so ill save the artillery
Havnt heard you yet, so ill hold back the hostility
And just spit a few bars to get this thing going
Its Sayber VS Karma folks, now showing

I've never seen your lyrics, but you claim to be famous
You say your a good rapper, though you could be tasteless
So ill write a few more lines and start looking ahead
If you thought you would win, i guess you've been mislead

So get that pen and paper and start writing dude
You want beef? I'll give you the whole barbeque
Then sit back and watch as you prepare to attack
Its time for Karma to take effect, and give me something back

Good battle. Saybers was dope, with some well placed angles and content.
Karma really came with it though. f*cking sick wordplay.
I vote for AyeItsKarma.

Both came hard with this. Saybers was great with the structure but lacked the heat with the word play.
even though karmas lines were a little too long In My PO, I have to agree with SBU. Karma killed it with the word play.
I was realing pulling for saybers but Karma dropped a bit harder than he did.

My vote Karma.

I here ya. I Voted you on the sure fact your punches and word play were sick.
I like saybers too but you won this in my O.P

I think you're way too cocky when you say that whoever votes for Saybers is a retard.
Anyway, Saybers wasn't bad, but Karma gets my vote.

loving your own style is dope, but (in my opinion) disrespecting others' individual styles outside of your battle bars isn't dope.
Anyways.. damn.. with that attitude be careful not to get lazy with it. you're highly skilled but never assume to be the best there can be. always loads of room for improvement. do stay hungry for more, yeh
peace

He don't now me very well do he? lol J/k.

I agree with molo and SBU.

Karma....watch it home skillet. you may be next to fall.

we will see karma, we will see.

good battle man, the right person won

better luck next time Saybers you put forth great effort homie...

Though its unneeded, my vote goes to Karma. Sick ****.