A Verse On Dead Presidents Instrumental

All thoughts/opinions/criticism welcomed. Audio will come soon with this

Got you on savatical, covered in catacombs
I cant ignore your cataracs keepin cats in cadillacs
I see you blind, but then I'll find it doesnt matter lyrically
cause comin up is just a conspiracy, seriously,
its comin full circle, like a bowl of cheereos
clearly yo, wack rappers need to learn to fear the flow
but dont cross the streams like the ghostbusters team
Or i'll flood your whole scene like hurricane irene
So fix up your levis, fill your ford or your chevy
yes we, dont roll heavy with a beamer benz or bently
no gucci, prada nada, or rugs marked with fendi
but you can find us sending truth, like a young soldiers salute
This a hot sixteen, pristeen and stupid fluid
Dead presidents freestyle if its worthwhile
no hot styles, dawg, i mean thats a hot pile
I can turn this to a roast just need to move the dial
No stove on my waist, just patties on my plate
no need to elaborate, but just in case your the candidate
plan a date, or mandate a number for my murder rate
its never too late to watch bodies accumulate
These dead presidents will never represent me
They may find me, but only to catch a dim-e
damn, i meant dam-e, a fine fox like jamie, I would flo mo, but no homo

great stucture and flow. nice way to use you words man. I enjoyed reading this allot. hot. Shi* Tre
drop some audio on this if you get a chance.