Atop My Mind

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  1. Joe4Jet's Avatar

    Joe4Jet said:

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    *Something different... when the song is created then the flow and melody will make sense. But nothing makes sense, like this song.*


    I really try to think straight
    But my mind refuses to compensate
    Isn’t it great
    Isn’t it great
    When I cut right through the red tape
    Red tape

    Crumbling walls that surround my life
    All will be revealed before I die
    Don’t lie
    Don’t lie
    The truth is on the inside
    Inside

    Bottle it up and stick the cork in
    Notes enveloped with ink of sin
    I swear I’ll win
    I swear I’ll win
    Be sure to repeat this story to your kin
    Your kin

    Treasure chest filled with skulls and bones
    This acre of land is not my home
    I’m all alone
    I’m all alone
    My mind is where my life condones
    Condones

    I know I will always survive
    In the little house that sits atop my mind
    If I’m so kind
    If I’m so kind
    My home is where I shall resign
    Resign
    --My love has a place, filed it so
    Collecting dust, sadly its unknown
    Hopes raised, high is the bar to expect
    The life that once was, I now forget--
     
  2. OneSongWayne's Avatar

    OneSongWayne said:

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    I really like the way this song is written. Structure and flow is awesome. Very Original.

    Well done!