My mates ryhmes, give feedback please

Thread: My mates ryhmes, give feedback please

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  1. Saybers Lyricals said:

    Default My mates ryhmes, give feedback please

    The ethnic morals of today kinda get me sad
    Alcaholic consumption with kids addicted to smoking fags
    So many young girls envy attention, we now call em slags
    Look at society - tell me the state of it aint bad?

    When talk on beats i still aim to talk the truth
    Some talk is cheap that why im stating facts to the youth
    like How many other rappers mention devious political plans
    Do any artists in the charts mention corrupt political commands
    Maybe im wastin time, just writing this simple text
    Cause we should aim to change this world and clean it from this mess

    Never call me a sellout, i treat my soul worthy
    and i aint living hellbound, so u cant claim i live dirty
    Cash, drugs and slags are products of an illusion
    Placed in this world by devils, eager to cause dellusion
    im pleased to say i aint guna change for things we see
    My raps and track are speeches of truth cuz im true to me
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    SK'nDeep said:

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    Saybers that was nice bro...Deep meaning great ryhme stucture...This relates to what I believe in. Beautiful work man...

    PS
    If I was you I'd stamp a copyright date on that piece....
    Peace Love Empathy

    Sk'nDeep