Hey, im 16 and i just started writing a month ago and this is what I have so far! Tips?
Tougher than titanium,
Deadly like uranium,
Lyrical bullets,
Penetrating em, ending em
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Pen packed, ready to attack,
I will destroy you with my lyrical caliber,
flows so nice; pencil on paper,
I make no mistakes, never touch the eraser.
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Because you see,
Like poison mixed with reverse psychology, definitely*
Dominate for centuries.
Lets face it.
Close to the feminine side, you are the closest,
You like being in the closet, took a lock and closed it.*
Im not the only one, everyone here knows it,
As youve probably noticed,
I have you under my control, like hynosis,
Important like headlines, cant miss this,*
John Wayne, cant miss ****.