The house where love lived

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  1. mc2011 said:

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    The House Where Love Lived

    I tended the tarnished pasture
    That had been diluted by fraud
    And of your frank omission
    I would soon be assured
    You'd left it instead to a friend of friend
    Who made his pleasure quite plain
    And as the rose wilted when the new bride was jilted
    And left me to suffer in pain

    The bird were busy singing
    Of yesterday's melody
    And of my voluntary submission
    They sat and wept for me
    So when they resumed with tomorrow's tune
    All of their voices were broke
    For they could see what'll happen to me
    And on their tears they all choked

    I sat shaking under the tree
    Searching for clarity
    You were the angel in the gutter
    In all your holy vulgarity
    The wasted expectation and premature elation
    Of our tragic heroine
    And to tormented perfection you had no protection
    You just went to be seen

    There was broken glass in the locket
    When you greased the saviours palms
    He provided cheap narcotics
    And promised they would do no harm
    And of the acclaimed beauty he said was his duty
    To love and hold her for the night
    I fell in awe at the abuse I saw
    It kept me awake past light

    You bragged of your deceit
    As if victory in a you game
    And I was left with defeat
    Quivering with my shame
    And you sat so proud dishonest and loud
    Unaware of the vowels you had broke
    And you left me alone when the motions were thrown
    And the house of love went up in smoke
    Last edited by mc2011; 04-29-2012 at 02:43 AM.
     
  2. mc2011 said:

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    Any criticism is welcome
     
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    Any feedback would be helpful
     
  4. Zakynthos said:

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    Excellent! I love it. =)