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Im in love
sorry if it makes you feel bad
but shes got a man
and he makes me real mad
cuz i love her
nothing is above her
thats why I call her my star
she should probably be a lawyer
cuz shes way above the
bar
tequila, straight shots of rum, and margarita
i would do it all for my little senorita
I want to be with her like heir...ess
im scared that this ferr...is
wheel
will never allow us to live
the life that i promised to give
my family and my friends
all start to look down
because we're just kids
how can we take the crown
they say i can never run my town
im from the city where bun cam
and paul wall hang around
but im still on the come up
get done up if you run up
ive been raised by this philosophy
so i do it if they try me
but I dont bust guns back
cuz i got killers behind me

not bad man... I would work on it some more..I like the idea behind it. relates in many ways...keep at it hommie...

thanks sk'n
do you have any advice

Shoot me a PM I will see what I can do...