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Please tell me whats this spitta' to do, and its true,
Having to get through, opsticules to pass you. . .
Im running round' crazed, for some days,
Calling for help cuz' Im becoming dazed, up from this phase. . .
And Im the illest from the best side,
But I ain't trying to rep sh*t, but still Im West Side. . .
Never denied' it, so I did'nt hide it. . .but some how I had to f*ckin' guide it. . .
Im a real n*qqa with no shame. . .Comin' up to the rap game, with you calling me lame. . .
But I ain't the one for the fame. . .so back the f*ck off Im jus' here to entertain.
Try to maintain your use of main bane. . . Cuz' I will use your name with alot of vain
But don't get angry mang'. . . Your lucky Im dissing you with some what disdain. . .

Originally Posted by _Nostik_Go_Hard

Please tell me whats this spitta' to do, and its true,
Having to get through, opsticules to pass you. . .
Im running round' crazed, for some days,
Calling for help cuz' Im becoming dazed, up from this phase. . .
And Im the illest from the best side,
But I ain't trying to rep sh*t, but still Im West Side. . .
Never denied' it, so I did'nt hide it. . .but some how I had to f*ckin' guide it. . .
Im a real n*qqa with no shame. . .Comin' up to the rap game, with you calling me lame. . .
But I ain't the one for the fame. . .so back the f*ck off Im jus' here to entertain.
Try to maintain your use of main bane. . . Cuz' I will use your name with alot of vain
But don't get angry mang'. . . Your lucky Im dissing you with some what disdain. . .

Please tell me. whats this spitta' to do?
If I have to get thru obstacles to pass you ill work til my wrist is blue .
Im dazed, calling for help, show me all about what it takes
To raise from this crazed phase, to have faces praise my name.
Im the illest like peroxide, hail from the best side,
I ain't trying to rep sh*t, but ill provide Im straight West Side. . .
Never denied' it, won't hide it. Think its fly **** an ill die with it.
Im a real n*qqa with boss name. Nostik, NOS'ing the fast lane
Nah not for fame in the rap game, just to plain entertain

nice freestyle