Lyrics review please :)

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  1. BugsLyrics said:

    Default Lyrics review please :)

    Hi everyone,

    I just found this site & was interested in getting some opinions for my latest 'creation' It's a little cheeky but not what I'd call explicit & written to suit the rock genre. Appreciate all feedback. TIA

    TIME’S UP

    Leave me panting, out of breath
    So insatiable, its life or death
    Craving an intense need for pleasure
    An excitement beyond all measure
    Inside a deep throbbing, a yearning
    I can feel every part of me burning
    Turn me on, time to call it a night
    Or is your bark worse than your bite?

    CHORUS:
    Time to pull yourself……… together…….(Time for birds of a feather…)
    Time to go at it hell for leather…….(Time for birds of a feather…)
    Time to get under the weather
    Time’s up, it’s now or never
    Time for birds of a feather…
    To ‘FLOCK’ together.

    So hot it leaves me sweating
    Etched, no way we’ll be forgetting
    Linger above, I love the teasing
    I want it to show no sign of easing
    Make me come (come) closer to you
    Let’s pay the devil every cent he’s due
    Turn me on, time to call it a night
    Or is your bark worse than your bite?

    Time to pull yourself……… together…….(Time for birds of a feather…)
    Time to go at it hell for leather…….(Time for birds of a feather…)
    Time to get under the weather
    Time’s up, it’s now or never
    Time for birds of a feather…
    To ‘FLOCK’ together.

    BRIDGE:
    Time’s up – Get on your knees
    Time’s up – Do to me as you please
    Time’s up – Make me scream out, beg for more
    Time’s up – …..I Can’t take anymore!

    CHORUS:
    Time to pull yourself……… together…….(Time for birds of a feather…)
    Time to go at it hell for leather…….(Time for birds of a feather…)
    Time to get under the weather
    Time’s up, it’s now or never
    Time for birds of a feather…
    To ‘FLOCK’ together.

    ©Yolanda 2011
     

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