no longer smoothtung

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  1. smoothtung's Avatar

    smoothtung said:

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    ...f*ck that sh*t, with an elevated game comes an elevated name
  2. tackpic_47's Avatar

    tackpic_47 said:

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    that sounds hostile.....wats going on!
  3. smoothtung's Avatar

    smoothtung said:

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    Not hostile dawg, focused
  4. Deleterious's Avatar

    Deleterious said:

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    shaadow you're rhymes did suck
    You're a 're-do' and you still can't make a buck
    Not one ho* you could f*ck
    A dead skin, still muck

    Shaadow you're a bit 'whack-o'
    Tryin to get high on tobacco
    Mythology, you get killed by the Draco

    Shaadow you're names not even spelled right
    Adding a extra A doesn't make you tight
    You're a fail remake despite
    A failed rapper i think is quite right
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    smoothtung said:

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    Is deleterious really serious or 'cathode' delirious?
    I hope he's hearing this ~ here's shaadow the lyracist!
    Clearly im steering scripts to hallowed appearances,
    Fear me I'm gearing quick. - fast so, you've veered the 'stick shift'

    "Please sir" -
    "back the f*ck off me", I ain't stoked.
    Your 'fly' above 'river oaks' with bullet holes in your coat...
    I'm sick of this "I'm so dope, but don't flow" , bro.
    If you don't know,
    At 'allthelyrics', call hysterics old...

    Nope. hold. No bloke is sold on what you wrote.
    I read one quote and skipped the rest - text was a joke.
    Last edited by smoothtung; 01-04-2012 at 06:59 PM.
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    You change you're name cuz you afraid of 'duce'
    Maybe I was wrong duce still got some juice
    You 'claim' to be better but you know the 'truth' that's you try to truce
    Did I spoil the ending
    A rapper, you sure are 'pretending'
    Because this is you're 'pre-ending'
    You're too 'technical'
    You're not even dissing, make some sense 'unethical'
    Like an eel I out-rhyme you electrical
    Lyrically you're asymmetrical
    You're rhymes fall asleep like 'hypothetical'
    These rhymes go beyond "parenthetical"
    This is my last mode, known as a one-hit-wonder equal to 'ethical'
    You're divided so small you're 'infinitesimal'
    You're incomprehensible, nonsensical, you rap like you got no testicals
    You get popped Faster than 'pop-rocks'
    I pop you're shots With pop shocks
    Shaadow you're only a 'shad' of a 'o'
    You're too pu*sy to stand full blows
    A cold nose, you reek of rolled rose, a banquet You're 'Full-H*e'
    Like a puppet You need 'whole-hole' sowed
    Last edited by Deleterious; 01-05-2012 at 11:54 AM.
  7. smoothtung's Avatar

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    Hold up....You think I'm scared of things imperatively embarrassing?
    apparently sombody's the result of poor parenting...
    An adult that force fed Porsche red paraffin - And beat him till bleeding ceased an switch to keratin.

    What you're crying about bruv ...I'm not caring,
    You want a whole lot of trouble but my rebuttal is terracing.
    I'm on a whole 'nother level, you've been 'uphill staring',
    I wear a 'duck bill' but come through, treble blaring.

    'Suddle daring' ~ but you belong in the rubble..
    Stepped on - stomped out ...and dragged through a puddle.
    You're 'blow blind' , I'm so high exact to 'hubble'.
    If you don't blow minds you'll get gagged out in this tussle...
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    Deleterious said:

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    post that the in my new all out battle i will respond there
  9. smoothtung's Avatar

    smoothtung said:

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    Nah respond here. If u can..