Everyone welcome anyone can start

my verse
shaadow you're rhymes did suck
You're a 're-do' and you still can't make a buck
Not one ho* you could f*ck
A dead skin, still muck

Shaadow you're a bit 'whack-o'
Tryin to get high on tobacco
Mythology, you get killed by the Draco

Shaadow you're names not even spelled right
Adding a extra A doesn't make you tight
You're a fail remake despite
A failed rapper i think is quite right

shaadow's verse

Is deleterious really serious or 'cathode' delirious?
I hope he's hearing this ~ here's shaadow the lyracist!
Clearly im steering scripts to hallowed appearances,
Fear me I'm gearing quick. - fast so, you've veered the 'stick shift'

"Please sir" -
"back the f*ck off me", I ain't stoked.
Your 'fly' above 'river oaks' with bullet holes in your coat...
I'm sick of this "I'm so dope, but don't flow" , bro.
If you don't know,
At 'allthelyrics', call hysterics old...

Nope. hold. No bloke is sold on what you wrote.
I read one quote and skipped the rest - text was a joke.



my verse
You change you're name cuz you afraid of 'duce'
Maybe I was wrong duce still got some juice
You 'claim' to be better but you know the 'truth' that you try to truce
Did I spoil the ending
A rapper, you sure are 'pretending'
Because this is you're 'pre-ending'
You're too 'technical'
You're not even dissing, make some sense 'unethical'
Like an eel I out-rhyme you electrical
Lyrically you're asymmetrical
You're rhymes fall asleep like 'hypothetical'
These rhymes go beyond "parenthetical"
This is my last mode, known as a one-hit-wonder equal to 'ethical'
You're divided so small you're 'infinitesimal'
You're incomprehensible, nonsensical, you rap like you got no testicals
You get popped Faster than 'pop-rocks'
I pop you're shots With pop shocks
Shaadow you're only a 'shad' of a 'o'
You're too pu*sy to stand full blows
A cold nose, you reek of rolled rose, a banquet You're 'Full-H*e'
Like a puppet You need 'whole-hole' sowed

Hold up....You think I'm scared of things imperatively embarrassing?
apparently sombody's the result of poor parenting...
An adult that force fed Porsche red paraffin - and beat him till bleeding ceased an switched to keratin.

What you're crying about bruv ...I'm not caring,
You want a whole lot of trouble but my rebuttal is terracing.
I'm on a whole 'nother level, you've been 'uphill staring'.
I wear a 'duck bill' but come through, treble blaring.

'Suddle daring' ~
...but you belong in the rubble..
Stepped on - stomped out ...and dragged through a puddle.
You're 'blow blind' , I'm so high exact to 'hubble'.
If you don't blow minds you'll get gagged out in this tussle...

You're right you are on and whole nother level and i'm up-the-hill staring
At how low you are and you're still daring
Like i said earlier you just trying to prove you need to diss so 'make a move'
you on the 'flip style' I'll flip you so bad you stuck on the 'diss file'
You're 'worthwhile' as much as stabbing rappers with the 'handle' of the blade
You're a mere retard you use the wrong end of the 'candle' and make yourself 'dis-made'
'Crying' you're so delirious you jump off a cliff thinkin you be flying
You make no 'sense' like charlie sheen thinking he is a drug
You better than me? You're computer must be on a 'bug'
An accident, no forgiveness, worse than real 'due'
'Do I feel you', I feel unstable and 'unfilled rules'
A rule code, A snail slowed, You're a dull choad'
'Shaadow' more like you 'jaw-blows' With the 'Blow-job' screamin 'Go Mom'
I 'blow-blinds' because when I'm done it's kill you with 'curtains'
You speak in broken language
You kill mic's in Wreckage
The worst spitter, You're wits sound like 'whickers'
No vigor, sh!t's vicar, You're like a gay 'nipple nipper'
You try to pull liquor in this trigger
Ransom, tantrum, You chomp on d!cks like a 'tip tripper'
Wither, reconsider, you Suck 'rods' like the 'fisher fissure'

I dislike the devil and demonted spirits
plus garbage music and decending lyrics
Why decending?
cause everything you make is a downfall
you a .01
you don't even deserve a roundoff

" Deleterious " doesn't your name mean harmful
aint thats the definition
but all in all you a pusxy so you get no recognition
Change your name? yes I recommend it
cause im the one that brings death better check the damn clinic
oops i mean the hospital
i had to correct my statement
but you don't need to change yours cause it already belongs on the pavement

and you can eat dirt while you down there
shut yo axx up cause you aint from around here

All the lyrics belong to Molo and many fxcking others
thats why you not in the family picture...you just a step brother!

Seriously, You thinking deliriously, You're another Full blown 'tackpic' just a 'tacky topic'
I'm no step brother I ride solo for the picture
I bring the real stricture
'Roundoff' These 'Punch's' dive you so down It 'rips the groundoff'
0.0 Defeat make you a 'jerk-off'
I tear souls so the call me the ripper
You d1ck, spit like a 'tip dripper'
You're wit's withered, You're the 'sh1t's blizzard'
These rhymes you've just been delivered
You dis-like the devil well I'm 'atheist'
Quite radiant, expatriate, You're not 'radiate'
You another 'fake' 'bate'

You're just ****in wit me right, cuz I started **** on ur piece...
U don't think ur better than me right..?
Cuz I got alooot of advice for ya

Deleterious if sb doesn't drop a verse by the time the other battles are finished you will get a bye and face me in the second.round of matchups

Shadow's rebel cloud settles down opposite the sun,
Hallowed metal crowns like treble sounds off of his gun.

How though? Just a shackled 'black' gown of numbness.
Or could this brown nosed ground pose expose more than sun plush?

Dumb luck, you've strayed into the shadow of sin friend.
Have your head at the gallows with a raalow to harrow an end.
My text leaves you sallow like a fat shot of heroin - an salvos leave a shallower count of your keratin.

Embarrassing, but merits bring some 'wit' to the punch,
You wear a ring but dont care one sh*t about love.
A married thing ~ 'unweddable'. I'm paired with this stuff.
I love the game - you f*ck it so incredibly much.

I'm not respecting that ~ if I can't correct that I'm rowdy...
And you'd best lay down in my skidmarks when pulled 'Audi'.
I could embark an spin bars all over the county,
While I hit hard, you're out getting rigged hard an drowsy..

Bring out the 'audi' and the 'power'? It's 'horsesh1t'
A 'former shadow of yourself' so you should once more 'forfiet'
You're wits 'unframed', an uneducated gay, you need 'sexED'
my 'Punchs' send you to 'bed'
You got a bit of 'slopy math'
Is that all you're flips?, looks like a 'roughdraft'
You're rhymes are 'dirt' so i think you need a 'bath'
You say you're the top but i see a 'onebill'
You're silly, completing the 'fill philly'
You can't beat me 'hillbilly'

Look man you're new to this, still coming with loser sh*t.
You couldn't 'come clean' using lysol for lubricant...
Rook ~
I'm more dangerous than a loaded chamber is..
A scary foe to a full-blown flow pla-ga-rist.

Your plans foiled - everyone can see you bit me dracula.
...But you couldn't 'flip sh*t' playing in toilets with a spatula.
'Hillbilly'? Best stop with the coy sh*t, I'm asking ya..
Or ill come through with a scalpel, ..hack your back an snatch your scapula..

I'll 'beat you' till your calised - don't be careless. Understand it.
An if its ever time to 'pass the wrachet' you'll get the part that's damaged.
You ever fight a rap addict? ~ Nah you wouldn't manage.
We hurt pride, verse like - let 'quits' be your bandage.

But you couldn't 'flip sh*t' playing in toilets with a spatula

sounds like eminem bro

Alright rookies, stop with the d1ck riding.. Puss1es
I'll c0ck block if I'll have to and drop sh1t out my tooshie

Originally Posted by killanatural

But you couldn't 'flip sh*t' playing in toilets with a spatula

sounds like eminem bro

Originally Posted by Who

Alright rookies, stop with the d1ck riding.. Puss1es
I'll c0ck block if I'll have to and drop sh1t out my tooshie

I recently listen to em's first album an that punch enquired itself in, its not biting , for the setup and actual punch Is worded differently and switched from topics a fair amount. What I'm trying to say Is Its more like adopting vocabulary. (Like everyone does. Some more than others)
Like recently someone used; "one thought in my cerebral is deeper than a jeep full of people" that on the other hand would be eminem, and that is plagiarism...


...id like to see you push this 'p*ssy' / ~'woody'...'would he'?
I'm not even 'rookie' if playing chess with my 'rook' piece.
Whoop me? Who? you're about to get shook see... - ..this crook's deep cerebral's - ...like legally releasing brookie....

Like a flock of geese would be... ~ thy chalised artform.
Who Plots in peace goodly, but my malice harks war.
En roúte I reach 'crudely' - the maddest across forums.
Astute and cutely rule, like a palace atop aurum...

peep my swag, I am far from cheep
gucci bags full of weed
switchin cars every day of the week
you dont want with me

trust, pull out my guns and bust
so hush, I'll be the one to judge
whenever enough is enough plus
i love to watch my enemies crumble to dust

spread your ashes across
the ocean if I must remain harder than lust
every time i come and eff

some sht up leaving you stuck inside a rut
totally fuked about to blow up
like a viatnimese hut

guys am like out of whole tourney i didnt even face anyone

Face me. Set it up an drop a verse

Originally Posted by DuceDaMicRipper

peep my swag, I am far from cheep
gucci bags full of weed
switchin cars every day of the week
you dont want with me

trust, pull out my guns and bust
so hush, I'll be the one to judge
whenever enough is enough plus
i love to watch my enemies crumble to dust

spread your ashes across
the ocean if I must remain harder than lust
every time i come and eff

some sht up leaving you stuck inside a rut
totally fuked about to blow up
like a viatnimese hut

'Vietnamese'? Be it some mean @ss swagger..
Leave it to me to speak in craft ~ clean ..n' fatter.
Your dreams? Shattered.. - bags of weed? Seized in laughter..
And seems your only 'high'-speed' was the feening basterd...
I'm leaving raptures... lathered in 'actions' of 'guns'..
And heaving blasts spur an fly fragments in tons.
I 'peep'd your swag, reeked of rad, but reason with 'tung'..
I'm the chief of 'swag', I 'feen' rap - and 'reason' with none..

I'm the high seas in format.. ..and shift like the tides do.
I amass ash in 'current's - while 'thrift' is 'behind' you..
I break 'lust' level with diamonds ~ and brillows topped..
Brush the 'dust' off your trebel, confining billowed drops.

i kick a man while he's down
I 'sourround sound' a 'shadow' is the 'background'
you talk back, fu*k rap, you talk smack
You go coke to crack, you go 'suck to choke'
You goto flip strings, you 'suck' more than a 'd1ck' sings
A f*g who denies being g*y
You diss me cuz you're rhymes suck d1ck you're a nobody a 'shadow' of a 'd1ck'
You've been at rap for years and only have had the 'sh1ts clapped'
You're 'd1cks strapped'
Any n1gga here could get you 'B1tch slapped'
'shadow' you're like sbu a f*cking 'unicorn' 'not real' wats next a 'unihorn'
Oh wait it's 'uni*****' A 'd1ckless B1tch', All talk a bit 'bushy'
A 'low down scum', A mushy tung, A false truth, shadows a lie

I'm done with you delet. For now, I'm just busy wit work an **** and honestly I ain't guna do this 'insult punch' sh*t when you aren't stepping up your game. It makes you a worse writer.
Do your hw, keep writing, an get back to me.
Check my piece above in reaction to duce's.

..also I started writing when I joined the sight in October. You can improve quickly if taking advantage of your opportunities..