Eww weird song of weirdness. I think it shall be in B minor :P

Never Again - Copyright © RobberBaron Enterprises 2012

[Verse]

You were the first person that I ever fell for, and I,
Thought that you would feel the way that I did,
Turns out your love was just another bad thing in my life,
Instead of freedom, you left me here in pieces

[Chorus]

Never again will I look at someone the way I looked at you,
Never again will I open my heart with out seeing the truth,
Never again will I cry the same tears, or waste these years looking for you,
I know I will love, never again

[Verse]

I can't believe you played me into your heart, you just,
Made me want you more, did you see how I hurt?
The cracks still bleed inside my heart where I let you in,
I can't take more lies, cos love just brings you suffering

[Chorus]

Never again will I look at someone the way I looked at you,
Never again will I open my heart with out seeing the truth,
Never again will I cry the same tears, or waste these years looking for you,
I know I will love, never again

[Bridge]

Please lie to me,
Let me believe,
That this is real

Just for today,
Oh can't you stay,
Because I need you

Why did you lie?
Leave me to die,
I can't escape this

Seems love just breaks,
Any heart that falls,
Into the trap

[Chorus]

Never again will I look at someone the way I looked at you,
Never again will I open my heart with out seeing the truth

Never again will I tell myself I could be happy,
Never again will I leave my soul unlocked and drop the key,
Please just pretend it'll never end, I know I'll love,
Never again

Oh yeah B minor sounds ideal for a broken hearted song!
The Requiem key, after all

wow awsome really good i think i enjoyed this very much

Thanks; see I wanted to stray from conventional pop techniques and cliches, for example rhyme sequences.