Unfinised Lyrics, Would just like an honest opinion or any feedback.. Thanks

#1 Girl you got me going crazy thinking about you lately all i want is for you to be me lady i know these other guys have treated you really shady but just know that aint mei know its hard to let go the past but baby with me youll let go of the pain fast so for me to complete this task all i gotta ask is will you be my lady.

#2 The way we are with each other has its ups and its downs its smiles and its frowns and i know at times you get scared and start to think of me as a clown but all i want to do is take you all around the world and show you off as my girl cuase your beauty so rare as a pearl i know you think of this as spitting game which is a shame but i know im put in this position cause of all the other lames that put you through pain but let me step up to the the plate cause like Pitbull said," I dont play baseball but ive hit a homerun all around the world."

#3 The thoughts of being alone waiting for your ring from the phone mess with my mind it seems that everytime i give my all to a girl i just get put to the side sometimes i just want to get away and hide cause why feel pain if there is no gain so i grow strong and as i put on so sick of love songs you suddenly come into my life and give me all the views that i should make you my wife girl you got it all your beauty is so great it should be a poster on the wall so all i ask is you dont leave so ill never have to fall again cause with you i got a win.

I would appreciate any type of feedback positive or negative, and also any tips. If you could also tell me which number you like better. thanks very much and may god bless

Thank you i apprectiate it very much