Meant To Say

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    Johnb31 said:

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    Do you remember when we were afraid?
    To let our fears slip away
    We always seemed to find a way
    When the world cried out in fear
    We slipped away in our tears
    Trying hard to escape
    The world as it crashed into fate
    " Chorus"
    Do you know what I meant to say?
    Do you know how it use to be
    Everything we have is made in misery
    And the world cries out like a company
    Buying and selling for empathy
    We are lost, clouded into history
    And all we know is left on the burning page
    From a book we can hardly read

    Do you remember the world?
    And how it was, so long ago

    Is there something we can do?
    To make history seem new
    Can we bring back the dead?
    And bring back the world in our head

    Can we hold out our hands?
    And be given our last stand
    We're falling
    We're crawling
    We're down on our hands
    Chorus"
    Do you know what I meant to say?
    Do you know how it use to be
    Everything we have is made in misery
    And the world cries out like a company
    Buying and selling for empathy
    We are lost, clouded into history
    And all we know is left on the burning page
    From a book we can hardly read

    Can you hear the voices hum
    Down steel mountains they come
    Holding guns of intrusion
    Loaded with dissolution

    Can you feel the confusion?
    As we fall into illusion
    Painted in our shallow minds
    We are like rope set to unwind

    Soon we'll be eating from the trees
    Grown from the seeds of lies
    Planted within our minds

    Further and further we walk the line
    To receive what we want
    But we're to dumb to open up
    Are eyes that are taped shut?
    By the deception shrouded over us
    "Bridge"
    We can stand up
    We can stand up
    We can open our eyes
    And see through the lies
    We can rise up
    We can rise up
    And be more than just sheep
    In a herd
    We can be heard
    We can be heard
    We can make a difference
    That makes us more than what we were
    ……………………………………………
    ………….(Instrumental only) ….
    ……………………………………………
    Chorus"
    Do you know what I meant to say?
    Do you know how it use to be
    Everything we have is made in misery
    And the world cries out like a company
    Buying and selling for empathy
    We are lost, clouded into history
    And all we know is left on the burning page
    From a book we can hardly read

    This isn't how it has to be
    We can survive the catastrophe
    Join me and we'll find a way
    To right the day
    To make this world a better place
    A place where we can escape
    The pain that we can't erase
    This is what I meant to say
    Last edited by Johnb31; 07-18-2012 at 12:31 AM.
     
  2. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Rhyming confusion with illusion is brilliant.What more can I say,Brilliant!
     
  3. Johnb31's Avatar

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    I wrote this last night it came out of no where.
     
  4. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Have you ever considered writing a short story or novela?You've have ideas flooding from your brain!I've haven't written a thing since I found this site!I've got to be inspired or a girl has to dump me for my poetry to blossom.I don't think watching the Real Housewives is inspiring me!!!!
     
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    Hey I changed and added some stuff to the song.
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Still up reading my Replies,I see!I didn't know this song that well to notice the difference.I usually make my Comment after the first read.First impression and so on.Still like it.Any comment on short stories etc.?
     
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    I've been trying to write a book but every time i get into it i get a new idea and then another and i end up restarting a million times. I get ideas from tv, movies, books etc, and its usually random i just wait for the moment for it to pop up and then I snatch it before it slips away. Go some where peaceful where your mind can start flowing. It sounds crazy but i have written or had the idea for a lot of my songs while in the bathroom or while taking a shower its something about the simplicity of it and how it just is what it is.
     
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    No matter where you get your inspiration it's all the same.As long as you get Something out of it,who cares if it's on the toilet or in the shower or waking up from a good dream.Good song ideas are hard to come by,and you seem to be bursting with ideas.Quentin Tarantino had stacks of scripts half finished before finally completing his first one.(True Romance)After selling his first script he had the money to help finance his first directing job on his own film.See,it can be done!P.S.Outstanding rhymes,simply outstanding!
    Last edited by Doug Denslowe; 07-19-2012 at 12:17 AM. Reason: Outstanding Rhymes Comment