Your glass features would shine
In the morning sun
Everyone would surround
The devoted one
They all took for granted
Your unequivocal faithfulness
That I in my weakness
Failed to possess

Your heroic vitriol
Of my bitter indifference
And your condemnation of my being
Was Of such overwhelming significance
Your word used to beat me
I submit to your desire
And I began to preach
The malignant words of a liar

I haven't seen you in. A while
Not since I Loved you most
Back when I was the child
and you were the ghost

Oh your crown began to slip
There were others just like you
Who's dependable affection
Could serve them just as true
Your willing little face
Now etched with tears
And time was so suddenly swallowed
And you lost all those years

You used to be so tall
But you soon fell from the stilts
Now you have shrunk
And are consumed by guilt
But you've not lost that obeying smile
Though the rest went without a trace
You were nothing if not compliant
Yet easily replaced

I haven't seen you in. A while
Not since I Loved you most
Back when I was the child
and you were the ghost

Im back in the shadows again
I haven't been here since we were children
Where your obedient path is well trodden
And you are embraced by friends
The symmetrical buddies
Oh how you laugh so loud
Pointing at the isolated corner
Where there were dark clouds crowd

And here I sit and ponder
As the rain falls in
Another chance I squander
And the fears begin to sting
And with sudden shock and horror
As one does in splendid realisation
That was once so detestable
Is now my salvation



Any opinions would appreciated

Your the real deal!(Must keep it "G"rated here at ATL)This and Goodbye Old Past are classics!You're definitely someone to watch,or keep an eye out for.I've looked over your threads you've asked for comments.I've noticed that you've given not one comment to anybody's song lyric.Is there a lesson to be learned?To get you must give.