Shadow Lives

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  1. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said:

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    Oh, when the shadows
    Come say hello
    Do they know?
    Who they are

    When the shadows
    Go away
    Do they know?
    What to say
    "Chorus"
    And it's things like these
    That keep me down
    With the shadows fading
    Into the ground
    Will they ever be found?
    Will they ever be found?

    Long ago
    My shadow showed me
    A long road
    That was so lonely
    He and I
    Had a good time
    Talkin bout the way it was
    Before the sun and stars
    And how it was so long ago
    Chorus"
    And it's things like these
    That keep me down
    With the shadows fading
    Into the ground
    Will they ever be found?
    Will they ever be found?
    Again
    "Bridge"
    The shadows are lost
    When we are found
    The shadows eclipse
    The lives of sound
    And all we know
    Is lost inside
    When shadows
    Fade into the sky
    We are lies
    Of own affliction
    Bound by our own volition
    Chorus"
    And it's things like these
    That keep me down
    With the shadows fading
    Into the ground
    Will they ever be found?
    Will they ever be found?
    Our lives in the ground
    Can we rediscover?
    The world that he built
    And live in peace of mind
    Can we escape the time?
    And find our shadow lives
     
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    Johnb31 said:

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    Shadows intrigue me. They wouldn't exist without light or a physical object so with out them what are we?
     
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    smoothtung said:

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    I enjoyed this piece, my favorite part was the bridge without question, very poetic

    "The shadows are lost
    When we are found
    The shadows eclipse
    The lives of sound
    And all we know
    Is lost inside
    When shadows
    Fade into the sky"

    Im fond of this.
    Good job John.
     
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    smoothtung said:

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    And I'd rather not ask it of you but I'm finding myself desperate for help on my first attempt at actual song writing. You mind taking a look at my piece entitle 'beating Bleading hearts'? I threw the start together in less than an hour so it's short but it is important to me.
    Thank you.
    Take care.