Heart warming

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  1. Dustay said:

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    Heart warming, you tell me,
    can't you say anything nice?
    I need time, to myself
    because your not listening to meeeee...

    Now turn around, turn around, turn around blue eyes.
    Hold your hands up to meet mine.
    I'd whisper sweet sweet words, but that doesn't seem to make it clearer.
    You've left me all by myself
    surely you'll find somebody else...

    She saw me, in the movies.
    That's right girl, you knew me.
    Now I'm paid, for my role played and your out with another guy.

    Now turn around, turn around, turn around, blue eyes.
    Hold your hands up to meet mine.
    I'd whisper sweet sweet words
    but that doesn't seem to make it clearer.
    You've left me all by myself
    surely you'll find somebody else...

    I'm a rich man, I hit the grand slam.
    I'm done doing, all that I can.
    But I'm still just, like I was.
    Sitting alone wishing, you'd pick up the phone.

    Now you're gone, and I'm wrong.
    I should have kept you all along.
    I'd throw it all away, if I could get you back for one more day.
    Just so I could hold you again...

    Now turn around, turn around, turn around, blue eyes.
    Hold your hands up to meet mine.
    I'd whisper sweet sweet words
    but that doesn't seem to make it clearer.
    You've left me all by myself
    surely you've found somebody else...
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    I like this.the verses are very relatable.Only one suggestion that to me would make it a classic;reverse the two last stanzas.Putting the chorus,then a verse would,in my opinion,make this perfect.Then it would read;verse,chorus,verse,chorus,verse,chorus,verse. That being said,I do end my songs with a chorus.(When I can't think of another verse!)