Putrid Stupid People

Putrid stupid people
Breeding putrid stupid kids.
Why do you breed
When you cannot feed
The ones you have bred
That never get fed.

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Its people like you
People like you 2
You belong in a zoo
You do
You belong in a zoo

On the road you’re a tool
You think you’re so cool
In your bullshit car
That never goes far
A pretentious wank
Of a white trash tank
That’s broken and bleeding
From abusive speeding.

Your demented road rage
Causing drivers of old age
To crash in fear
From the rage they can hear.
And your evil spawn laugh
In fear of your wrath
And respect you demand
But they don’t understand
Why their daddy is so scary and mean

And as for your brats...
They’re pack of sly rats
Demanding food
Their manners crude
Their behaviour disgustin
Your asses need bustin
For the filth that you spew
And the evil that you do
To your children in lieu
Of patience and kindness and love

But your character’s rotten
You’ve truly forgotten
By example in turn
Your own children learn
And with anger and hate
They seal their own fate
And with little to give
Their lives will be lived
Being nasty and mean and disliked.


Your dog you neglected
Her affection rejected
You never did need her.
You forgot to feed her
All day she was tied
And she barked and she cried
Ignored and unnamed
You should be ashamed
How could you mistreat
And so cruelly beat
Such a beautiful creature as she. Your loss.

Your relationship’s built
On your lies and guilt
You bully and blame.
In your need for a name
And with meagre kindness
And selfish blindness
You hurt those close
With a spiteful dose
Of venomous words filled with hate.

Your woman personifies
The sort we all despise
The doormat defeated
Her whining repeated
And without any pride
She stands at your side
And shrieks like a banshee
In a need to be angry
With words from the gutter
No woman should utter.

You folks are too bent
To be bothered with rent
And your kids eat bread
And condensed milk in bed.
Their teeth are so rotten
The dentist forgotten
Cos mom is too stoned
To remember she phoned.
The appointment misplaced.
When dad was shitfaced

If you go to their home,
Its like a war zone
No pride in possessions
Just parental obsessions
Clothes all scattered
Kids rooms never mattered
And you gag at the stink.
As the truth makes you blink
At a home so neglected and bare.

They live in their squalor
And squander their dollars
Then find a good soul
To rattle and roll.
And callously crush
A kind heart in their rush
To spit out their bile
With words that are vile
And for reasons that no one can fathom.

But don’t be concerned
For the evil they’ve learned
These people don’t care
These people aren’t fair.
They’re twisted and torn
Their battle lines drawn
And they don’t give a damn
For your money they scam
Or the poison they spit at your face

To you stupid people - remember this
As you live in your broke **** putrid bliss.
The theory of Karma has no limit
She’ll pay back your spite and all that was in it
And when you die
At your last goodbye
No one will know
That no one did go
Cos no one was there
To see no one cared.
In fact all they said was “Good Riddance!”

Ingaden September 2012

This is so cool!I didn't have the guts to post something this opinionated.The closest I came was "Real Problems"and "The Store"on the Poetry site.I'd like for you to read those two,if you have the inclination.This is so good with so much Truth.I disagree with the Karma lines.I don't believe"what goes around,comes around". I wish it was true,but unfortunately,"a good deed never goes unpunished".Bravo on this piece;I didn't see a chorus,is this a song or poem?Either way,fantastic work!

Originally Posted by RickeyJoe

I agree with and mirror what Doug has said above save for one thing. I also do not believe in Karma, but I do believe (and don't get it twisted because a lot of people think they're the same thing but they ARE NOT) in is "You reap what you sow." So, in a very rudimentary way it is similar but NOT THE SAME as Karma. While it does appear that Doug is right about No good deed going unpunished or that the bad don't seem to get what they deserve... they will and they do, in the end. It all comes out in the wash, god's light shines on the just and the unjust alike. Excellent song you've written here. Do I detect a bit of experienced anger and bitterness in this one? Anyway, like I said, good job.

Oh,Rickey,if only it were true!Tell that to the kid born with brain Cancer,it's all good,you'll go to Heaven!

Originally Posted by RickeyJoe

I agree with and mirror what Doug has said above save for one thing. I also do not believe in Karma, but I do believe (and don't get it twisted because a lot of people think they're the same thing but they ARE NOT) in is "You reap what you sow." So, in a very rudimentary way it is similar but NOT THE SAME as Karma. While it does appear that Doug is right about No good deed going unpunished or that the bad don't seem to get what they deserve... they will and they do, in the end. It all comes out in the wash, god's light shines on the just and the unjust alike. Excellent song you've written here. Do I detect a bit of experienced anger and bitterness in this one? Anyway, like I said, good job.

Thankyou both to RickyJoe and Doug. And yes you do hear experienced anger and perhaps some bitterness in this one. Also a strong sense of betrayal...and Im still puzzled as to 'why'?? Dont some people realise what side the bread is buttered on??? I shake my head as the vitriole continues and I try to get them out of MY HOUSE since they've now decided that they have no need to pay rent either!!!!! Sigh.....the writing was therapeutic tho and I felt better for it...Lol...

Thank you Doug.....I only agree with Karma to a certain degree - I guess I was trying to say that their lives are miserable because of how they treat others....or something. Chorus is near the beginning after the intro....I didnt put it in the rest of the song as the song is so long but insert between each verse...Cheers for your words of encouragement.

Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe

This is so cool!I didn't have the guts to post something this opinionated.The closest I came was "Real Problems"and "The Store"on the Poetry site.I'd like for you to read those two,if you have the inclination.This is so good with so much Truth.I disagree with the Karma lines.I don't believe"what goes around,comes around". I wish it was true,but unfortunately,"a good deed never goes unpunished".Bravo on this piece;I didn't see a chorus,is this a song or poem?Either way,fantastic work!

Doug....how do I find the poems easily or do I have to go through page by page to find them? Cheers

Ingaden,
Go to your profile page,or click your NOTIFICATIONS,on top of page for Private Message.I gave you the info there.