'make me real'

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  1. Wilson said:

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    (VERSE 1)

    Everyday with you
    it's just amazing
    waking to see your pretty eyes,only gazing
    babe you are the headline
    in my story
    forever you will be with me like a memory.

    I tend to wink at you when passing by
    girl you're so cute
    I cannot deny
    you are all I got,don't want extra more
    and if loving you is insane,i'll never be normal.

    <HOOK>

    I'd never dodge a bullet
    if you were its target
    baby i would trade my life
    just to see you
    safe
    and if our love is real we will make it through
    i'll be right beside you coz you are my boo.

    {CHORUS}

    Even in the rains and storms
    i'll always be there
    hug and hold you like you were my teddybear
    you are so special,
    you make me real.

    Sitting next to me,I get so happy
    I feel like the chosen,who gets to be lucky
    like a video game i wona play caught
    girl in your arms,i'll be totally locked.

    (VERSE 2)

    I think of you
    like always
    24/7 you make all my days
    if it's a fairly-tale,you'd be my queen
    I would make you happy truly like me.

    <BRIDGE>

    Twinkle twinkle
    baby you are my star
    everything we do
    ain't a disaster
    me and you kissing under the mistletoe
    I love you so much,I hope you know.

    (c) 2012 WILSON GITAU KINYUA.
     
  2. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    This is really good old fashioned songwriting.The only line that didn't "ring true"in terms of rhythm was the line;"I would make you happy truly like me".It's not a bad line,I just found it threw the rhythm off.Otherwise,terrific!