Is This My Life

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  1. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said:

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    I find you
    When I'm asleep
    I find truth
    When Im awake
    But I don't know
    What is happening
    In this world
    That you never
    Cease to create
    "Chorus"
    With foggy eyes
    I can't read these lines
    Is that what I'm suppose to be
    a play written before I was a dream
    Is this play my life?
    One word at a time
    One word at a time
    Is this my life

    Is there a triumphant plot
    In this play which is me
    Is there a reason why
    I'm saying such pointless things
    There must be more to this story
    A sequel maybe two maybe three
    Oh come on let the people see
    What is truly me
    "Chorus"
    With foggy eyes
    I can't read these lines
    Is that what I'm suppose to be
    a play written before I was a dream
    Is this play my life?
    One word at a time
    Is this my life
    "Bridge"
    One word at a time
    In a play that doesn't rhyme
    It has no point it has no time
    So what is the point of me
    Playing this crime
    What is the point
    For me to live this life
    One word at a time
    "Chorus"
    With foggy eyes
    I can't read these lines
    Is that what I'm suppose to be
    a play written before I was a dream
    Is this play my life?
    One word at a time
    One word at a time
    I speak with such truth
    But know nothing of sorts
    Am I a character-
    Of a play
    With words chosen-
    for me to say
    Or do I have a way
    To change...
    To change...
    What I'm meant to be
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
  2. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    John,another thought provoking piece.In answer to your question;you are a character in the play called Life.The goal is to be the Director and not just a supporting player.(Also,being the script writer is a goal to shoot for,but you're Director material.)
     
  3. Eccer's Avatar

    Eccer said:

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    What doug said above

    Anyways.....wow! I really enjoyed this! As this resemble my thoughts on the next piece i'm gonna put on the poetry section, either later today or tomorrow. Hah, how we all think alike

    "With foggy eyes
    I can't read these lines
    Is that what I'm suppose to be"

    Yes..... yes it surely is!
    Last edited by Eccer; 12-27-2012 at 08:31 PM.