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Last edited by Debeaux; 02-07-2013 at 03:15 PM.
Any girl should feel honoured by such an intense declaration of love and tender feelings.
I hope you'll be rewarded one day, hopefully before the angels catch up with you!
Totally! Such an amazing song!
Debeaux,
Reading your songs makes me so happy (that's why I commented on many of your songs). They make me happy because it's nice to see someone who is so honest. I think honesty is what makes a song special. You definitely have it and you're not afraid to show it and you're not afraid to put it on paper. A lot of people are. Your honesty combined with such a huge talent for finding rhymes and saying exacly what you want to say should take you far. I would love to hear you playing the song. Amazing job!
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Last edited by Doug Denslowe; 05-29-2013 at 07:12 PM.
@Tania: You are so right there,love. Nothing can beat honesty. Take it from there when you start writing is a very courageous step, but very important. Good you brought it forward once again!
I feel like I've said this many times on here, but it still applies to this piece of work. Whatever your muse, don't ever let that go. this is beautiful and amazing.
We're a little bit stranger on the inside