Haunt This Smokey Bar Room ( another slice of country pie for RickeyJoe)

Thread: Haunt This Smokey Bar Room ( another slice of country pie for RickeyJoe)

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  1. Debeaux said: 01-22-2013 06:54 PM

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    Doug Denslowe said: 01-22-2013 07:29 PM

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    amaryn said: 01-23-2013 04:23 AM

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    yeah, Debeaux, me as a singer, can hear myself sing this song with a whole load of passion and anger!
    Thanks for a great reading moment! Gonna make myself lunch now and hum this at the same time
     

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    Tania15 said: 01-24-2013 07:18 AM

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    I really like it. I liked the rhymes. It's a great piece. It definitely makes a really good country song. I imagined it almost folk: a singer, one or two guitars and maybe a fiddle, but with a very explosive, angry 3rd verse. That's how I heard it in my mind. I don't know if really goes like that. Thumbs up for a great song!
     

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    amaryn said: 01-24-2013 10:37 AM

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tania15 View Post
    I really like it. I liked the rhymes. It's a great piece. It definitely makes a really good country song. I imagined it almost folk: a singer, one or two guitars and maybe a fiddle, but with a very explosive, angry 3rd verse. That's how I heard it in my mind. I don't know if really goes like that. Thumbs up for a great song!
    Yes indeed, Tania, this grows to an angry climax Johnny Cash might have wished in this repertoire.
    Debeaux has delivered!
     

  6. Debeaux said: 01-24-2013 04:28 PM

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    RickeyJoe When you reviewed my song Ozark Mountain Memories you said it was a slice of genuine pie, country flavored i assume. I really liked your comment so that's why I directed this one to you.